All Comments on 'Cum See Me After Class'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Enjoyed the story, looking forward to more

I enjoyed the story. Seems like the scenario you've layed out would give lots of potential followup stories. I'll be looking forward to them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
ok, but

The writing is ok and the sex was ok, but it all happens a little too fast. More description is needed, and more introspection on the part of the professor is needed. Is this high school or college? In either case, its unrealistic for someone to be going about bragging of this sort of activity. He would very quickly loose his job. The professor was clearly faithful to both his marriage and school ideals for many years. What has changed? No quilt?

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