by ShotsAndHotSpots
Thanks for yalls help!! I'll pay more attention to my phrases and my point of view layout =)) this is my first and I hope I can make it better
The phrase is "worthwhile" or "worth my while" and two different perspectives should definitely be in different paragraphs.
This is a really good start. If you wanna do two perspectives, I suggest hitting enter twice and putting the names over the paragraph when you switch. I wanna see how this ends ;)
Pick one point of view and stick with it. Jumping back and forth gets confusing and makes this long.