by RawHumor
pretty goood, except the jack off facial, cunt mouths should be pumped full of cum, let them breathe but pump them full of cum!!!!!
Your descriptive writing paints a very clear and erotic scene. Thats exactly how I would like to be treated by a Master with the little reassurances. I think I would have cum the same way she did too. Reading this definitely had an effect on me.
Thank you for writing this,
Lisa
and I do agree with others- make it into an audio - need help ? *wink*
This had just the effect on me it should have...very nice.
At the end I was was dreaming of looking up at you with my eyes aglow knowing real pleasure. Love the story. Katy
RawHumor, as always Your words make me tingle. i love Your imagry and word play. (And though i know i cannot deepthroat quite like that... lol ...i am always lost in a fantasy world that You paint in my mind!)
i also agree with MsTexas. This would make one HOT FUCKING audio story!!! Please?!?!? Do i have to get on my knees to ask? lol
I enjoyed it very much, it made me wish I was sucking a cock right now.
I especially loved the part in the end, with the woman looking used and abused, yet loving it.
I can definitely relate to that feeling and it's a great feeling.
I loved your story....conjures up images of being deepthroated to completion. Your Cunt Mouth Whore really needs to wear a pair of opera length latex gloves, not only for the visual effect, but there's nothing like the feeling of saliva coated smooth latex gloves on your erect cock and balls. Trust me, been there done that countless times. You also need a cock ring which will make your erection much larger and also produce a huge explosion of semen down her throat. She would appreciate that.
Very, Very, Very hot! Luved it. Made me want to be the *pleaser*. And, I agree, should make it into an audio.
You should make this an audio, I would love to hear that voice reading this particular story. Excellent!!
Straight to the point and right inside my head. Thank you x
...but what you do with it! Deliciously wanton story.
Great little story, there Raw...I like the way this girl is yours and will give herself to you completely.
grow up, become a man and find a real woman
Good short nasty story. You put your reader straight into the fantasy without endless poorly written setup. Wish more short stories of this legth and intensity would be posted.