by ellabee
Max is a great lover and his reputation on campus is deserved as a great lover. She's not bad either. The story was a bit "high schoolish" in parts, but all in all a well-written, knowledge story.The story turned me on. Keep up the good work.
An absolutely amazing story. I loved it very much. Thank you for sharing.
Very good! I enjoyed it immensly, hot and believable. I wonder if Max and Char really stay together or if her doubts come true. Will there be a second part?
Your story was incredible, you have written more since 09, I'd really love to hear what else would happen! :)