All Comments on 'CvsN 02: Celebration'

Thre's definitely company here! Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Jesus Christ this guy is good!

And so the arrangement continues to grow and fill their lives and loves. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

I would prefer fewer chapters with more pages. Not 50 chapters with 2 pages each, rather 25 chapters with 4 pages, or 12 chapters with 8 pages each. Thanks again.

Back for another read, it's a great romp.

Fantastic what a brilliant story so well written and thought out, loved the characters and story line.

Another user said "You're building a masterpiece." Well, THEY ARE RIGHT!!

That was a wonderful chapter. I know that if I was a woman, I would be spending a lot of time with my face buried in between another woman's thighs. As a man, I do enjoy giving a woman head, almost more than having intercourse with them.

I am glad you settled on this format. Ordinarily one gets tired of too much happy. But you are such a master of erotica that the complexity of the characters is enough tension to keep the words flying off the page. Great

CONGRATULATIONS

ive read this series a few times now and continue to read with eagerness (and a raging hard on) i also read these to my wife in bed and im unable to get to the end of any page without my cock being sucked into submission !!!

I just found this story again. I read it a year or so ago and loved it then. I will read it all again with hopes of enjoying it

IMHO, this story (uniquely) expresses how one man, at one time, can find two very different women (with very different characters, strengths, vulnerabilities, and appearance) deeply attractive. It's not that all men are inately "sluts", just most of us are, most of the time... if we're honest with ourselves. Then someone really special comes along, and somehow you're hooked... your soul starts singing, and you just keep coming back for more, compulsively. I guess the same goes for women, if they could afford to be honest about it.

I get the feeling that Jack is falling for Debbie... and the feeling is mutual. At least that's where I want this story to go. I love it so far. Thank You for taking the time to write it. Well Done.

Like building to a great release........

You're building a masterpiece.

Jeesuz dude.. sadly i cant wait to hear about what happens with the house!!!

more,more,more!!!

Thanks for sharing this.