All Comments on 'CvsN 21: Confession and Contrition'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Interesting Story

Very well written and a nice pacing

SoharaSoharaover 13 years ago
More!

I've really enjoyed the series and can't wait so see where you take it. The character interaction is the best part of it.

Blue_Steel30Blue_Steel30over 13 years ago
Beautiful

This is beeeaaauutifuull you have taken this story from hot and lustful sex to Hot, Lustful and Love with sex. I am hurting to see what is next with the characters and the upcoming work trip and day care.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good Job!

These newest chapters are great. I went back and reread the whole series from the beginning. As the stories progress, it's cool to see your writing become more refined. I like the T-Shirt Hell references. One of my favorites says; "I didn't buy this shirt because it says fuck on it. I bought it because it says fuck on it twice."

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Just a Suggestion

Loved this chapter..

Just a suggestion though... How about bringing Chris(Boss) in the House that Lust built???

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Gary Andrews (garyandrewsbodyguard@yahoo.com)

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 12 years ago
you went deep in this chapter ( on multiple levels)

I enjoyed the ying & yang this one. The woman here are to be ridden hard but not to be put away wet. Emotions & feelings were heard, reflected and empathized with.

Sexually if I eat right , say my prayers , lift weights and take vitamins there's not a doubt in my mind I could handle a mini-harem. But responding properly and in timely manner to a duo/ trio /quartet of women's emotional needs? I get exhausted just contemplating that!

doorknob22doorknob22about 11 years ago
Another five stars!

Thanks for your efforts.

jeshazmijeshazmiover 10 years ago
Ron Amie and Chris

Please let Ron and Amie go all the way.

Please bring Chris in the play, I like the way Beth is becoming dominant, make her more so. Would be nice to have a fancy dress part at the house that lust built, with being sexy as the theme

blackknight314blackknight314about 1 year ago

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

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