All Comments on 'Cynthia'

I've enjoyed many of your stories so far. (My contact with The Net is a bit spotty, and I've missed a story or two. I'll have to play catch-up.) Previous romantic stories with dominant/submissive subtext were lovely, and I enjoyed the Non_Consent/Reluctance in this one. Does the Next level you speak of on your Biography page include consensual, negotiated D/s?

GREAT MORE SO HOOOOOOOOT

GOING! i love it and i cant wait for an update! i think liam and cyn are gonna get together...

That was one of the hottest stories I've ever read. I'll forgive your typographical errors this time, but if you keep it up, you'll get a spanking like Cyn. Just kidding -- and I'm a straight, Black woman, by the way. I'd also love to explore the taboo subject of interracial fucking, but not just romantic stories. I want to delve into non-consent/reluctance where Black and White are concerned. To me, it is just as hot if the guy is White and the girl is Black as it is when the guy is Black and the girl is White. ... As for you, may you continue to be inspired to slap the nonsense out of the White/Black sex taboos and stereotypes. Don't stop wringing the cum out of all of us who desire more, more, more fucking good stories like this.

You should continue this story. I wuld loe to see where this goes.

So, I always reread this story about once or twice. I don't really know why i like it so much I guess I am freak like that. But I dont think I ever actually want that to happen to me, with my luck it wouldn't be 2 supers hunks who happened to be jerks, it would be 2 creepy guys from from an episode of Dateline's To catch a Pediator. Yeah, not so hot, always you should continue with this story. It would be cool to see where you take it. If not, hot story anyway.

maybe its just me, but i want him and any friend to have a career ending injury. that means his stupidity will be evident, and only so many gullible females to seduce for their own end. end the illusion, or perhaps more precise, the delusion he has and others have of him.

I absolutley love this story!

You should continue it and if not

then you should make another story

about reluctance!

going to write another chapter about them i know its been a long time since you wrote this one. But this is an awesome story I would like to see where it goes.

Nothing at all sexy, sensual about rape

I really like this story. It was very interesting and hot. Could you please continue with this story? I would like to know what happens next between Liam and Cynthia. I really enjoy this story. Every time I read it, it gets me hot. So please continue with this story. Thanks

This is a disgusting gang-bang rape, and should never have been published.

no, there is nothing sexy or sensual about rape in real life but you are in the nonconsent section, other commentors. what did you expect? i, for one, liked this story.

WTF i LOVE this story!!!!!!!

Like this one!

I hope the same fate befalls those two jerk offs.

A bad story period, this is crap.

I like it! When you want to teach a person a lesson do it right. Young lady you have skills please continue. Don't let those haters' discourage you let your talent shine.

Why does every girl/woman tha tgets forced windup in love/kist with her attacher(s)

Pure bull fantasy

That was rly hot! Rly hope u make a sequel, i loved liam's character

Liam should be honest with himself and realize that he is attracted to her and her shy, but non nonsense ways. This is non-consentual=rape. But the plot was good.

I really Liked this story I hope you aleast give us a part 2 would love to see where this can go..

P.S. I really like all your stories.. keep em coming

I'd love to see a sequel to this story too. But here's a thought, after a few more sexsational sessions with the boys, Cynthia realizes that she have brains and body. So she eventually gets the upperhand over the guys, get them whipped for her, and makes them write their own papers but reward them sexually everytime they suceed. But let's not forget, she's just as whipped for them as the boys are for her.

Where's part two already? See, you can't write a story this HOT and not make it into a complete series. But then again I can understand if you have writers block and can't continue with this idea. Thats why I haven't posted a story yet myself. This was actually one of the first stories I read here and it's still one of my top favs. I'll keep checking back to see if you have added to it.

sooo hot all of it but if liam thought i was going to write his paper after he must be out of his ever living mind

I love all your stories and I want to see what happens between Cyn and Liam. This story starts off perfectly. I have read it numerous times and I'm waiting for the second chapter. Also, make it longer (maybe 2 pages). Thank you.

That was awesome! When will ch. 2 be ready?

Did your deadbeat father drop you on the head or something? It's fantasy; subjective and relative. A fantasy is a fucking idea, you jerk-off, just because it's not stotic, overly painful, and like a 'realistic rape' where he has a gun to her head, doesn't mean it's 'bull'.

Ugh, dumbasses like you should never breed..

Anyway! I loved the story, Rocket~ I love all of your stories, to be honest. Haha. So, don't stop writting! If you feel up for it, write more chapters on this beautiful one-shot!

Great story.

I WOULD LOVE FOR U TO FINISH THIS STOREY IT HAS SO MUCH PROMISES KEEP DOING THE DAMM THANG

So ready for Chapter 2 .

I don't like stories that have to do with rape or any other forms of rape. I can't believe how many people get off on rape. I hate when authors make it seem that rape is okay, because they turn it around to make it seem like the girl actually enjoyed being raped by two guys. FYI: women's bodies have a natural reaction to rape not because it feels good it's because of the simulation of the body being rubbed. Apparently you get off on rape, because you wrote it and don't say it was for fun,because rape is not fun wither it's fact or fiction you have condoned that rape is okay by writing this story. These guys used their penises as a weapon to get Cynthia to write their reports so they could play football they are nothing but rapist. NO means NO!

Now that you've finished your rant, do you feel less guilty for cumming from reading this story?

... When are you going to write a sequel (or a second chapter, at least) for this awesome story?

I have been reading this tale for three years now and I always wish for you to write another part to it.

@Anonymous: You have to be a troll that is cruising through here, because I refuse to believe that your reading comprehension skills can be compare to a goldfish. You're reading stories off the Non-Consensual/Reluctance Forum. The title says it all.

There are a lot of women that enjoy these stories including me. That doesn't mean that I want to be raped or that I condone rape. It means that I like sexy stories about submission and giving up control. These characters are fictional. By the way, there's a reason why you're reading this story that maybe you don't want to admit. Get over yourself.

Another part? I'd enjoy it!!!

Rocketgirl, please make this a series or an ongoing story. It was soooo good. Nevermind the people who throw shade because if you didn't like the idea of non-consensual then why are you reading a non-consensual story. Love it, continue dping your thing.

please continue this, still learning your style of writing, but it would be perfect if he actually fell for her eventually, got to turn the tables on him... not sure how, but I'm such a retribution person... if such a term exist... lol

but very well written. Kudos to you.

this was kind of hot would love for this to have a chapter 2

I would've bit his dick off and spat it at his friend.

More please

I like interracial ravishment stories! This was fantastic!

This story was good and well written you should think of doing a second story

That was freaking HOT! I love the interracial reluctance/bondage type stories! You should consider making a few of your stories full length stories!

5 stars again!

"Where your usual outfit" shouldn't happen. Maybe check the forums for someone willing to help you proofread?

I guess it was an ok story but I think there should be a black dude and a white chick mixed up in the story, to make it more eventful

Plz write more!!!! I have read this story 5 times

Please make a part two or another story like this. I have read many stories and this is one the best I have read. The dominance was not too much, just enough. I hope you continue this story. I like the idea of a budding romance or dominance between Liam and Cynthia (Cyn).

Thought the story was good it got me off but not much more than that. Hoping to see improvement in the story next chapter

Please please please finish the story!!

Please finish this story!

Good story but it would have been even steamier if the studs had sodomized her asshole

I loved this story. These are the kind of black womanwhite-male non consensual stories I get into! I normally don’t the “Sir” part, just the male dominance. Where is part two?

You seriously sound as if you have never actually had sex, this story is so naive

Damn girl, ok I guess Cynthia is now a frat slut. I don’t particularly like forced stories but I get it’s kink for weirdos. And if consensual to each his own. With that said it was all in all a well written story. @JohnnyRebBB what’s wrong with naive not everyone is as promiscuous as you think. Hell I’m older and haven’t experienced 1/4 the smut I read. I look forward to reading your story. Thanks rocket girl for sharing your creativity