All Comments on 'Czech Adventure'

absolute garbage

carry on !

So this is what happens when a man writes non-con :) Welcome to the genre, sweetiepie. Don't let the 00 votes get to ya, gaining readers in the non-con genre is hard, slow work. My actual vote would be less than five because your story could improve with extra work on the language. Yeah, I know, not fair with second language issues n all that. Counting in the 00 comment already here, I decided to stick to the 100 ;)

Lemme add a danish side note: "God arbejdslyst."

...though typical male fantasy material. As Elly said, there are many technical issues that could stand to be addressed. Very good for second-language work. As for the commenter that wrote that your story was total garbage, do not be dis-heartened, that person still took the time to read your story. PT Barnum once said, "I don't care what you say about me, just make sure that you spell my name right!" In other words, no matter what they say, they read your story. -M

MUST HAVE BEEN WRITTEN BY A BLOND WHITE WOMAN WITH A FANTASY! WAS IN THE MILITARY FOR MANY YEARS AND SHARED MANY LATRINES AND SHOWERS AND SAW MANY MORE LARGER WHITE COCKS THAN BLACK!

I hope he got them pregnant