by Beautifullittlebaby
As it should be...how could a dad refuse his loving daughter...
oooh! that is sooo fucking hot!!!!
your writing is amazing-it had me finger fucking myself to multiple orgasms-
I really got erect at the lead in. You got me going at first then they just went at it like two randy teens. I expected more out of this from the beginning of the story. C'mon, the father is not a wet-behind-the-ears junior high school kid; he's an adult, let him seduce her like one
Could have lasted longer. Sorry. You have the talent. Keep writing, but make it believeable, please. I beg of you!
Enjoyed the story. Hope you are going to continue with the idea, especially since she is off to college. She has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work
Well stated off well then bam bam. These stories need to be realistic first and need a slow build up, foreplay, seduction etc to be real. Society teaches everyone that father daughter incest is wrong so it usually takes quite a bit to get over that in peoples heads. With that you need a battle of morality to go on , foreplay, seduction, and a buildup. Check browneyedgrrl story line to see a real good daddy daughter story for some hints :)
Flyguycal
Any story about a father fucking his daughter the summer before she goes off to college is a good story. He fucked her pussy and then he gave her his cum in her mouth. That's good too. You gave me an erection and that's good.
A little unrealistic to jump from reading a child's book to "ramming" his cock into his daughter's tight little pussy.
You need to take a little longer, add in some foreplay, some conversation....especially for a "first time" encounter with a daughter!