All Comments on 'Daddy And His Girl Caught!'

Can't wait.

you need to write in a much more gentle and loving fashion.

This is obviously simply a male fantasy

....who isn't even his biological daughter, and loves him more than her mom. The mom is evil, and I hope that she pays for it. She deserves the cheating, the cruel, teasing bitch!

"Daddy" needs to become a real Daddy with this step-daughter and to Hell with her mother. It is obvious that step-daughter would be a very good wifey for him.

I can't wait for the next episode!

Gna1970 has made a good start leaving us hanging for the next chapter of this tale. Writing is OK but a little rapid, could use more of a buildup. But enjoyed this first effort by a new writer. OK the writer is female not male as one commenter assumed

This is GNA!

I really appreciate all the comments that everyone decided to leave. I am new at this and thanks for the support for my first attempt. I hope to get better with time. I am currently waiting on chapter 2 to be approved.

I'm sorry that I disappointed the one writer who thought that females should be more loving and passionate.

I'm sorry that I don't fit your "female" mold. I am a female but I want nothing to do with the lovey dovey type of love making.

It is quite possible that a woman is just as interested in raw, uninhibited passion as any man.

Is it no wonder that my favorite book is "screw the roses, send me the thorns"

"Daddy" and step-daughter need to take things further with him becoming a very real daddy!

Good story, the next chapter should be where the wife decides to share her man. Maybe even in the same bed. Watching them have sex may warm her up to the idea that sex is not just a job.

I'll be the first to admit it's a sexist title, gna 1970! But if the mother continues to take things for granted,her daughter may replace the mother as his love interest!

I actually agree with the 2nd commenter, not much substance, the story is hot but overall flat because there is no real reason for it other then mindless lust, therefore there's no reason to believe it will ever last and consequently a horrible decision to "replace" his wife and get unreasonably mad (in the 2nd chapter) for a lustful but useless fling.

Hot. Made my toes curl.

liked it but i think you should add some more descriptions to your scenes theyre very vague but other than that i enjoyed the story

wish my daddy would play rough with me xxx~

caught Daughter getting ass fucked