All Comments on 'Daddy and Little One Ch. 04'

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txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayalmost 18 years ago
Very...

nicely done...thank you. repectfully in Texas naynay

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
keep it going!

i love the gentleness portrayed by daddy and the devotion from little one...i am curious to see where this is going? write more!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
I love this story...

This story is the dream of every man deep within...to have someone so sweet and innocent, and wanting/needing to be loved. Keep it going please....

bornagainbornagainabout 17 years ago
A Very Moving Story

Little One is very lucky little girl any girl would kill for that after getting out of those foster homes.keep up the great writing bronzeage.

bronzeage how old is Little One in this story and how come Daddy hasnt adopted her legaly with a real name legaly.?

Atlanta,Ga

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Love the characters

I'm really starting to like this story. Little One is so cute and innocent and Daddy is so sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Totally totally hot!

This is sooo hot.

dotmbl1415dotmbl1415almost 12 years ago

this is the best yet

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
sooooo fucking hot

Thank you, generous and talented writer.

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