All Comments on 'Daddy and Little One Ch. 08'

my my my...loved it...respectfully fan in Texas naynay

of the most erotic stories on Lit.

of the most erotic stories on Lit.

bronzeage, I'm so loving every word of your "Little One" Series. It's sensuous, romantic, and so very erotic. Your writing is perfectly wonderful.

This is my first comment on your Little One story but I've been following it chapter by chapter. This is so hot and I love the suspense. There is a dream-like quality to your writing, very sensuous and hypnotic. My pussy is creamy wet.

I can't wait until the next chapter is ready!! The first 7 are hot, hot, hot. Makes me wish I were Little One!

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I told you so. ;o)

Very hot.

Chapters 1-8 delight me. Your writing is delicious. I plan to savor the remaining chapters at my leisure. It is a treat to find a writer with grace- as in the ability to make your characters realistic, capture their beauty, and delight in the sensous minute details which made me catch my breath and imagine that I was part of your story.