All Comments on 'Daddy, Princess And The Storm'

Spending way too much time in chat? I'd hope that's the case for your lack of caps where they should be. The only excuse for not following the rules of writing is ignorance. If you don't wish to use proper grammar and punctuation, go stock shelves at Wally World.

To the poster before...I think the lack of caps may have to do with the BDSM category. I've read alot of BDSM stories and most of the submissives refer to themselves in the lower case "i" and do not capitalize their names. Author? Am I right? I'm just thinking...

anyway, I think this would fit more in the Incest category than the BDSM. There, to me, wasn't really anything to suggest this should be in the BDSM category. If I'm missing something, please feel free to correct me on it. :) It's not too bad of a story, it has some potential.

Very good story, only it would be improved with better puncuation. The characters could do with more depth but an enjoyable read.