All Comments on 'Daddy Takes Over'

So many comments about hygiene no one is concerned with how a tiny finger pierced her hymen?

Rapist.

I oculd feel that cock head and my pucker hole now, so hot

I shot 2 hot cum loads before the story ended. The first few blasts hit myself in the face, mmmm. HOT!

My clits throbbing thinking about a daddy fucking me

I’m so wet at the thought I’ll have to fuck myself with my toy and pretend it’s a nice daddy

Love ❤️ it. Keep writing ✍️ more chapters exactly 💯 like this. Don't change it for anyone. Good job 👏.

Inane conversation, poor narration, overdone Story theme. Not much here to like. Kind of a waste of disk space.

Dont like the sequels, but this one makes me come so fast.

I write Adult books and this is absolutely shite

After all these parts, did daddy turn her into a whore?

It made me put my big hard uncircumcised cock into my "butthole" stroker, and fucked my big dick while thinking about taking turns spanking her naked cunt with her dad's big fat pretty cock in my mouth, sucking like a little sissy-fag while stairing her inthe eyes, blowing her fathers big sexy naked penis while looking into her innocent eyes, awwwwwwww, I'd make her footjob my cock until I unloaded white FUCK all over her slimey nude sexy cute feet

Lmao people really talking about hygiene like this is porn 🤣 Shush people, it ain't real. If it ain't your thing, that's fine, there are thousands upon thousands of other stories on here that might appeal to you.. Go find those.

To go from ass to pussy is absolutely disgusting. Only a guy or a girl who has never experienced a UTI before would write that thinking it’s sexy. Yuck!

A lot of you in the comments are weird. The story is categorized as Daddy/Daughter nonconsent for a reason, yet you're whining about it being rape/ped*philia. Like, what did you genuinely expect? It literally has 'Daddy' in the title, tf

Imagine this as an after school special starring Brian Dennehy as 'Daddy'.^^

Is that a true story?

This should be made into an after school special presentation.

Sorry but the hygiene issues of putting it in her back and then front was too disgusting. Made the story flop for me

Despite saying she's over 18, it reads like pedophilia.

Okay this is just weird. It's disgusting. She's his kid. That's not how kids should be treated. This is coerced sex which counts as rape

There was an Anonymous comment talking about this and to you, I could not agree more. Rape is not a HoT thing or KiNkY. It is disgusting. All of you plus the people who read it and didn’t comment (but enjoyed it) disgust me and I hope you don’t find a lover where you think that’s ok to do it to them. SMH

A very obliging daughter gets her ass reamed before Bad Dad de-virginies her little pussy. She could do way better than this out on the street!

Her innocence and submission to her father makes the story hotter. The stories where the girls are short and innocent are the hottest.

I’m so fucking hard. I need to cum now. Please fuck me and talk dirty to me!!!

this older Daddy wants a sweet tasty young one like that to cream in my mouth and ride me like she rides a horse

My Former Husband has served four years of his 25 year sentence for raping our 10 year old daughter after beating me and then forcing me to have very painful anal sex with him. She came into our bedroom when she heard me screaming with pain as he buggered me. He caught her before she could run,tore off her nighty, literally threw her on the floor and forced himself into her . Her screaming was pitiful. After raping her he pulled on his clothes and ran from the house, leaving the two of us crying on the floor. It took me a few painful minutes to get to the phone and dial 911. After giving the police his description and the make and model of his truck,, it only took a couple of days for them to capture and arrest him, but almost a year before he was brought to trial. Both my daughter and I gave the necessary testimony to have him convicted. She is now a happily married mom of two boys and has managed to put that horrible night behind her. On the other hand, I was deeply scarred by the incident, not only physically, but mentally as well, and have not had any kind of sexual arousal since that day. On the advice of a good friend, I have started reading Literotica stories in an effort to recover some of the sexual feelings I once had. Until you have experienced REAL rape yourself, don't think of it as just another "kinky" sex play thing. Take it from someone who KNOWS.

I wish I had a Daddy to fuck me like this. ❤️

Had my pussy leaking! 😍

Holy shit. My cunt got so hot and wet reading this. My clit is throbbing so hard. It took all my willpower not to cum while reading this. Now that I got all the way through it without cumming, I'm going to reward myself by reading it again. Except this time I'm going to let my pussy cum. Mmm fuck. I need a daddy to do this to me. I promise I'll be a good girl and make sure our special daddy/ daughter time stays our little secret.

Me Too: you’re disgusting.

You're disgusting!!

I don't know how realistic this story is, but I enjoyed reading it. I hope the author continues to write these type of stories.

Anonymous 5 months

For real that is hot !

I loved every second of your comment !

Sexy

omg,,, daddy thoughts are the ones that drive me insane,,, i drip wet down my leg,,, my dad has always been so fucking hopt,,, i would peek at him fucking all the time,,, fuck!!!, wet...

This is what young daughters are for. Fuck toys to be used whenever Daddies need perverted sex. Taught how to provide any sexual perversion that their Daddies need, no matter how dirty or crude that might be. Every fuckhole to be made available at any time Daddy wants it.. Cunt to fuck, ass hole to bugger, mouth open ready for Daddy to dump his thick spunk inside.

Taught by older sisters how to exhibit in front of Daddies while they watch and wank. Knowing how to give the most crude sexual performances that will encourage their Daddies to ejaculate huge volumes of spunk, which they will lick up and swallow.

To please and entertain their Daddies they will happily have crude lesbian sex with other girls, with lots cunt licking and kissing, and finishing by letting their Daddies shoot spunk all over both their faces while they are snogging and kissing with lots of tongues going into each other's mouths.

My three daughters do all of this for me, often.

Be jealous.

This story is nothing but RAPE. Do not even say this was consensual........it was coerced!

What a slut ! She enjoyed this

I need more of this !!!!!!

This dad deserves to be horse-whipped.

Damnnnn made my pussy all wet .... need a part 2

I would be Suzie

FUC, THAT WAS SOOO FUCKING HOT!!!! ESPECIAY WHEN SHE CRIED!!! FUC!!!

Omfg yeeeeessss please

Please stop. Why are you complaining?? The incest is SO CLEARLY written in the title. The story is in the NON-CONSENSUAL section. This story is entirely FICTION. Jesus, just stop.

Onto the story, it was very well written, a few mistakes, but nicely done. Good job

Can daddy show you something?

Terrible line.

It's just a story people. Get over it. Find something better to do than find issues with stories on this site. You all KNOW WHAT kind of stories are on here don't like em leave easy as that. You remind me if the ones that have nothing better to do than find sexual innuendos in Disney movies.

Not sure about this at all.

First his is a erotic incest story. It's a fantasy and illegal to have sex with your dad so hygiene doesn't matter it's make believe. Secondly , you have a change of a yeast infection or urinary tract infection going ass to pussy. So it's not like something crazy will happen if this was real. People do this everyday.

You do realize this is fantasy, right? I'm sorry this "missing element" of stories here so bothers you, but if you will think a minute, there are any number of other such omissions, since, for instance, the stories also don't describe the care the characters need to take to prevent stds, unwanted pregnancies, possible smegma build-up (in uncircumcised men), the relevant moral/psychological repercussions of their often "radical"/risky behaviors, etc., etc., etc. Please work through this issue you have fixated upon on your own and quit sharing it so nonsensically in the comment sections of FANTASY-based stories. Thank you.

For pity sake..

I get that he's 'taking over', but at least start adding proper hygiene to the story. He was just inside her ass with his cock. At least have him clean it off before he puts it in her pussy. Putting his cock in her Ass & then immediately afterwards her pussy is just begging to give her an infection.

I see this so often on Lit, and it bothers me. Ugh

Mmmm loved reading this, made my pussy super wet and Just had to use my vibrator.

OMG... I got hard immediately. Ozzing precum now.

Great read.

Great story. Felt my cock growing hard.

makes me wish i had a virgin daughter to fuck

So naughty, so good. My cock is throbbing.

this is so hot

I could almost feel it sliding up her tight ass and then her pussy as she rode it...

This sounds like it was written by a 13 yr old boy with his first hard on.

"As an adult, I deeply regret not letting my dad fucked me when he begged me repeatedly and tried on many occasions to fuck me. He had a very long thick cock which frightened me at the time, because if was so big, and I was only 15 and a virgin. Now I am a mature sexually experience woman, I wish he was still alive and sexually functional. I have been practicing celibacy for some years now, and lately I am so damned horny. I need a large thick cock like my dad's was.....inside me right now, and on a regular basis. I fuck buddy would be great!!" Whoever posted this we should fuck i have a nice thick 8 inch dick for you. If your down reply back

I loved this story. Got my pussy dripping xo

Reported for what? For being a non-consensual story in the non-consensual section? Or are you reporting because it's an incest story not in the incest section? lol you're just wasting the mod's time when they could be focusing on actual reports.

Anyway, great story ^.^ I don't know why because no part of me wants to fuck my dad (not my type at all), but these kinds of stories really get me off!

All girls should learn to crave and respect the cock that made them.

As an adult, I deeply regret not letting my dad fucked me when he begged me repeatedly and tried on many occasions to fuck me. He had a very long thick cock which frightened me at the time, because if was so big, and I was only 15 and a virgin. Now I am a mature sexually experience woman, I wish he was still alive and sexually functional. I have been practicing celibacy for some years now, and lately I am so damned horny. I need a large thick cock like my dad's was.....inside me right now, and on a regular basis. I fuck buddy would be great!!

I like it alot. But seriously people. Its in nonconcesisaul. Come on.

For all the people complaining about it being rape, it's in the NON consent category. What the fuck did you expect? If you don't like the idea of stories likes this, maybe you should venture into a more consentful category and stop whining.

Reported

This is fucking horny.

I just squirted all over by wanking my clit to this.

Mmmm yeah daddy.

Horrible story. Not even an idiot of a father would rape his daughter on a whim like this portraits. Story sucks, big time.

Who the hell puts it in one whole then the other like that is just so nasty

This story is fucking gross! The father basically raped his daughter! There is nothing sexy in rape. Shame on all the people who saved this in their favorites. The dad clearly doesn't give a fuck about his daughter. I want to read incest stories that are based on real, unconditional love, not shitty rape promoting stories like this one. And who fucks a virgin in the ass without preparation, consent and lube? Oh, wait. I know. A fucking rapist. Oh, and putting your cock in someone's pussy after anal right away is a good way to catch a nasty infection. Retarded story. Retarded writer. Please stop writing.

Please write another one.

Fuck this pussy boy fuck it ..

Dun dun dun dunnfuck it right boy

You know I love it when u fuck it fuck it right boy

Do my dance on your dick ohh you know u love this shit

To everyone posting about how they hate the story because it involved incest, IT WAS LITERALLY IN THE NAME. you didn't have to click on it if you didn't want to so stop trashing on it cause you wernt even the intended audience of the author. K thanks bye (I myself enjoyed it immensely so congrats to the author for making such an amazing story)

Was that rape necessary?

And gross....from one hole to another...only a real dickhead would try something like that in reality. Just gross

We're soaring!! Flying!! There's not a star in heaven that we can't reach!!!

Fuck, this aint a turn on.....its so gross to fuck ur own dad

When will men learn? You can't fuck with a shitty pole, or she'll get a urinary tract infection. Rape is not a turn on either.

I have always liked being with older men and calling them daddy. But no I wouldn't want to fuck my dad or any man in my family that's gross. I wouldn't want anyone that fucked my mom gross but this was a good story!!!

I identified with the girl, wanting to please her daddy. I think it is every girl's fantasy, being able to give herself sexually to her dad. If there was a preamble, the girl would have fantasied and imagined how it would be to open herself up to an assertive father. She wanted him to seduce her and be her first.

I loved that when she cried as he fucked her ass, it made him throb and fuck her harder and faster. Love daddies that fuck their daughters.

I LIKED THIS STOREY CAUSE THERE WAS NOT AS MUCH CRYING AND WHINING. MY GRAMPA WOULDN'T LET ME CRY OUT LOUD. HE DID PREPARE MY ASS A LITTLE MORE BEFORE HE TOOK ME THERE. HE ALSO CUDDLED ME A LOT AND LET ME KNOW HOW HAPPY I MADE HIM FEEL, HE TOLD ME HE LOVED ME, SO I COULD NEVER SAY NO. IN THE 50'S IN TORONTO, MY ONLY FAMILY WAS MY GRAMPA FROM 11YRS. OLD, SO YOU LEARN TO LOVE IT, AS SHE WILL. GOOD WRITING, KEEP IT UP.

i don't really like the dad forcing her to give him her anal cherry and then fucking that shit up (literally) but everything after that I REALLY enjoy, including the hot as fuck sequels. Otter than the first rough ass fuck I LOVE these stories and tgink you should continue ;)

The dad is not compassionate and loving. Tearing daughter's ass. Giving her pain. I do not think that is good

i must tell the author that this is totally bloody fucking shit!!!are u gay or lesbian?????

just fuck yourself with a dildo write something worth 5 stars.....

bloody asshole!!!moron!!just FUCK OFF !!!!!!bloody bastard

Sometimes a girl likes to be forced... Just saying 😊

why are people bitching about daddy fucking daughter? It's in the incest section!!! duh! Fab piece keep writing loved the ass fuck but more begging for daddy to stop! Ace story

This is pretty much worthless shit, its RAPE and should be put in the fucking rape section if there is one, not sitting here ambushing those of us who want real stories for this section.

The spitting on her ass didnt lubricate a damned thing and her ass would be a bloody mess and she would be in the hospital getting stitched up. Then the bullshit of him sticking his contaminated dick in her pussy, fucking insane! The list of medical horrors that could cause boggle the mind.

What a sick fuck. Getting off on mentally raping your daughter and dressing it up with an orgasm, puhlease!

Joe Swanson, after watching Steel Vaginas

Don't lie about your sexual encounters to back up a false claim! The only women who don't mind anal sex before vaginal sex already have infections you should avoid coming in contact with, or they are post op transsexuals who do not have female reproductive organs that can become sterile or cancerous due to such irresponsible activity.

Please speak to an actual gynecologist rather than ask online and have ten people claim to be one. I recently saw two people claim to be gynecologists and then state that the hymen was located inside of the vagina! A gynecologist certainly knows the hymen is the extra skin around the opening or entrance of the vagina which keeps the entrance a tiny opening before it is torn. This location is why it can be torn during gymnastics, bicycle riding, horseback riding, and other strenuous physical activity which can cause that skin to become torn.

I can assure you that there are plenty of us women who love to have anal sex, but there is no way I would risk my life and health by having vaginal sex following it. Even in porn movies vaginal sex after anal and even oral after anal is only being shown due to the magic of editing. The porn stars were cleaned up and then the filming started again or the anal sex scenes were actually filmed last even though it was made to look as if it was one continuous scene.

Guys please don't jeopardize our health and possibly our lives by thinking what you see in a porno or read in an erotic story is real! It isn't about preference or being okay with something it is about not causing a life threatening infection!

This is a reasonably well written fantasy piece. When the father places his needs above the welfare of his daughter, the story takes on a detached, almost angry tone which may offend some. It borders on sadism, which fits since "daughter" is little more than a prop; more like a blowup doll that verbalizes occasionally. I picture John Leslie in the role as Dad as he cons and then forces himself on some nameless porn bimbo. Which brings me to my point, stories that objectify and denegrate women have an extremely narrow audience. To overcome that, it must be engagingly written, and not with the matter-of-fact, often clinical tone used here.

That was fucking hot yas ❤

I don't know why people are so cranky. I came!

It was a hot story. And personally I enjoyed it more than "Daddy and the elevator." Don't listen to these people who hated the story yet I bet they read the whole thing then took time out to write you an essay on how much it sucked. Like really?! Losers!

GOD, you call yourself a writer? Check out other stories and see if yours compares anything to them! This is so not a real sex story, this is cowardice! If you want to check out a real sex story go to Daddy and the Elevator or anyone of these other stories. Should you even be writing? You know, just stop writing. It won't do you any good to try to write a story, and if you call yourself a real author, go find some other position where people actually accept your story. It's going to take a long time, lollipopslut. But I will wish you luck, because you're gonna have to try Russia or Antarctica. Maybe nowhere, but hope this comment sets you right.

I recall my first time screwing my daughter that was 18 yrs ago ,she had just got home from her freshman yr in college..never went back and has took good care of me.

I'm gonna masturbate to this

You suck as a writer. Please stop writing. Signed. Everyone in the World.

If all you people have a problem with the Daddy aspect why the fuck did you read a story that is clearly in taboo/incest? Jfc don't read it if you're gonna just bash it. It's a story. Not a real life account. Personally, I don't read it as true birth father/daughter, but I do call my bf Daddy so I read it that way.

...would like to spend a long stretch in prison being anally done over by a gang of huge-dicked black men who are none too particular about hygiene either, and insist he take their filthy dicks in his mouth directly afterwards. A little rough deep-throat would be just the ticket.

Daddy dearest is a numbskull.

Loved this.After reading this i just went straight to daddy and sucked his cock.we have been fucking ever since.we fuck all day and all night.

Ugh, last poster needs to learn how to spell and form a sentence! You sound like a 12 year old trying to talk gang jive with a dick shoved in your mouth. Weetawdud!!

...anyway story was pretty good, should have hit the pussy first so the nasty shit covered cock didnt infect the freshly ripped and bleeding pussy! Yeah, I know its fantasy, but mentally distracting from the enjoyment :/. ...still, a 4!