by Glenda100
Great start to a series, I can't wait for the next one. Keep up all the good work!!!!!
Please hurry! This one looks like it might be as good as Mistaken Affair!
Hate stories like this, with no respect for the guy, even from his own kids.
I read this story long time ago, then i forgot name of this story, and from then i have searched for this story for about half a year, this time i was browsing all stories in section nonconsent - to find this story and one another which i must still find, write another sequel if you can.
Look... Even a girl doesnt like that low of disrespect from anybody... thats just shitty... The teaming crap is bull, plus its so unlike a man it isn't even funny. It's a good story, actually I'm just pissed that the guy didn't even try to fight them... and I know theres different people in the world, but you could have at least put somewhere... that he said something and they just kinda said fuck you. He needs at least one ounce of courage... otherwise ... he must be gay... I love gay guys but some dont stick up for themselves as much as a guy who actually has a kid a wife and his own house and pool like that... unless karen's bringing in all the money...
this is amazing work! really hot, and I especially like the tension between the characters. It's so odd to see the male act like that-- but that's a strength of your story, that it's unexpected & unique!
i really hope there are more chapters!
i want to read more about this family!
this remains one of my fave literotica stories...
The worst form of literary garbage I have ever read. Crap, crap, crap. NOT erotic at all,fantasize all you want this would never happen in real life you pansy ass bitches.