by espeteroh
Loved this as I think a lot of others will, men and women. This is quite a few peoples dreams, liked that it was quick paced and down to the point, couple of out of context bits but well done..
ohh god, absolutely amazing. I LOVE IT. i only fuck older men and i love it when we go into the whole daddy/babygirl roleplay thing. plz plz plz write more !!! and make sure he calls her his baby girl more !! tnks
Especially effective for me...
- Tracy
P.S. Have you seen my Daddy?
Enjoyed the spontaneity of each character's needs and actions. So many stories seem like a script with the characters going through the motions... Also appreciated the not as in-your-face obvious bdsm theme, more realistic for people who think they are just "vanilla."
Please remember to read your stories before you submit them. There are numerous grammatical and spelling errors in the story which spoil the flow. Think about what your characters might really say in these circumstances and not just what you want them to say.
OH My God. Daddy has to keep fucking this slut. Definetly must fuck her good and hard in the ass next time. Would love to see Daddy get kinky, and very very rough.