All Comments on 'Daddy's Little Angel Ch. 01'

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ObsidianBlade27ObsidianBlade27over 14 years ago
Ummm....

Good. Not great, but good. One word of advice for readers:

More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More.

It's one word, just repeated. Keep it going and I'll stay tuned in.

KOTKKOTKover 14 years ago
Good First Chapter.

But it was more like a tease :-) Hope the next chapter comes out quickly. Good job, enjoyed your story.

C_frommnC_frommnover 14 years ago
Great Start

Cant wait to see how Far Dad goes with his Angel. and how long will Mom put up with it ..Esp. if it gets Serious on Daughters or Hubbys part.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 14 years ago
A good start,

to the story and its building slowly. Hopefully in the next chapter we will see some action.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

I like that story a lot, but why did you stop there? :(

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