by kittenlove
Good. Not great, but good. One word of advice for readers:
More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More.
It's one word, just repeated. Keep it going and I'll stay tuned in.
But it was more like a tease :-) Hope the next chapter comes out quickly. Good job, enjoyed your story.
Cant wait to see how Far Dad goes with his Angel. and how long will Mom put up with it ..Esp. if it gets Serious on Daughters or Hubbys part.
to the story and its building slowly. Hopefully in the next chapter we will see some action.