All Comments on 'Daddy's Pretty Little Girl Ch. 01'

Enjoyed your story. Look forward to reading more from you.

Blink and ur done.

GOOD START CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.

Keep the series going

muiy buen relato y muy bien escrito y el personaje femenino tiene una buena descripcion para imaginarnos como es ella, creo que tenes que seguir haciendo capitulos sobre esta historia, ana maria

But then again I LOVE Daddy stories. :) Keep it going. You write well.

Great start - keep the series going.

cant wait for the next chapter! keep up the good work

We're dying to know more about Eric so keep writing as your name suggests.

Yes, most definitely yes you do need to continue this story. You have made a nice start in defining the principal character now you must develop a continuing story line. You have talent and show promise of being able to write very good pornography so continue by all means.

That was great. Definately have to keep writing more!

Yes, I like it. It's sweet and gives just the slightest insight into *why* a girl might like to play for her "Daddy"

Looking forward to your next post. :)

Ive read alot of porn stories and this one is lacking

Want to see more of Eric and "Baby Girl" - nice hot beginning - tell us what happens next please!

the start is good. I wanted to know how goes on with the two.

I quite like the attention to detail and that there is no instant sex.

Cannot wait for chapter 2 x

Good start- next chapter, please!!!

I really relate to this fantasy as I have just gotten into daddy/daughter roleplay with my partner who is 11 yrs older than me (i'm 22) and I am filled with so much joy and pleasure when he calls me his little girl, baby girl or baby doll... please keep it up.<3

WELLSO FAR ITS NOT TO BAD COMING INTO A STORY,BUT UNLESS YOU FIND HERE DADDY THIS IS JUST ANOTHER STORY OF A GIRL THINKING ABOUT IT ,

I THINK YOU SHOULD START LOOKING FOR HER DAD NOT ON A HOT LINE,FROM THE SOUNDS OF IT NOW ITS JUST A GIRL LOOKING FOR A DATE.AND MAYBE DREAMING ABOUT IT......................................................"R"................

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I'd like to be your daddy!

Really well written. I'd love you to continue this series.

Very good start. I hope to see more develop.