All Comments on 'Daddy's Such A Fucking Pervert'

The one fast seen flaw is how one word is spelled, the correct version is "shish" not "sheesh" such things distract.

Loved it

Thanks for this Very enjoyable father daughter incest story.

my biggest thing is the formatting of the story. the paragraphs are so huge that it takes too long to get through them, even for a very fast reader like myself. next time think about breaking them up a bit to keep the flow moving a bit better.

Try writing something in which the person telling the story shuts up and lets the characters talk. As usual, you give the dimensions for the guy's cock, the size of the girls' breasts, their ages (over and fucking OVER). Tiresome shit.

This is just a drawn out masturbation fantasy.

Learn fo f-u-c-k-i-n-g SPELL.

Good story!!.

FOR ALL OF HATERS THAT COMMENTED

DON'T FUCKING READ THE STORY.!!!!

FUCKING PUSSIES!!

Fucking awesome! Four stars, hardly even worth mentioning the dozen or so spots that needed editing for mistyped words. Have I just kept getting unlucky time and again? Where the fuck is this pussy that is so damned tight you have to fight to get your dick all the way in? I've been fucking robbed!!

Excellent read! Write on! :)

ten out of ten came twice while reading this.

Very well written, amazing story.

What a fucking pervert. Oh to be a bug in that bed. Bad Dad.

So sexy and thrilling. I came twice

Wonderful to have two "just legals" on hand for intercourse.

A scenario I wish I could be part of.

How about a story with Danny & Jayson?

The Father & Son MMF sounds hot. Maybe some DP?