by naughtypussysexy
I like this one. Mother-son 'loving sex' is great to read about and you seem to have found a very plausible format for it. I love your slow build-up and tantalising prose.
I love it - more chapters please!
Thank you,
Norman
sorry to say..and disappointed..this story isn't up to par with your scorching "Suprise" series...not as sex-charged..nor as... oh so wonderfully "nasty" and hotttttt....hopefully in the future you will return to that terrifc and hottt family from "Surprise"..and tell us more..for women/moms like myself the stud dad/son bi scenerio in "Surprise" is major turn-on...and needs further play...
With all the spelling and grammar mistakes I would normally give a 25, but the story is so much better than the normal wham bam thanks maam so often submitted to this site. An editor would certainly improve the readability of your story. Please consider that for future submissions.
I love it!!
I'm sure this is barely the beging I'm sure jon soon willbeccome Bull and Dom for Mom and dad
Luvin' this story so far! Keep writin'! I like how you made the dad manipulate the wife and the son sort of. It shows that you have a special writing knack about you.
I enjoyed the slow build-up in this story and have always been a fan of incest, especially mother/son. I'm sure I will like the following chapters as well.
Always enjoy a story where the mom/dad is good with the union. I can't wait for the next story.
Thoroughly enjoy stories with honest, mature and emotional character and plot development.
I’m. more into Dad/Daughter, Brother/Sister stories, but I have enjoyed this story so far. hope nobody starts pissing on anyone or calling Mum a dirty cunt. You’ve got a bit of romance here and hope you carry it through… we shall see… Onward!
Great story! This would be incredible to have as one of my greatest fantasies fulfilled.