All Comments on 'Dairy Queen of the Breeders Ch. 02'

I really like the topic of this story and really enjoyed your writing. There are virtually no stories about breeding; this gives you more a unique edge over all the other stories. I look forward to the next chapter.

However, the title and topic shows so much promise, that reading such a short chapter where almost nothing happens is a big disappoint. I realize that this is supposed to be a series, but when I can sum up your story into one sentence; it's much too short.

how much longer till the rest are done

soory you can write very good, but the two chapters did not fit with the title you gave the story.

I hope you will continue with the story and i can see why the story has this title.

Try writing longer stories, you have the potential for this.

I need more!!