All Comments on 'Damn The Fates: Merchant And Lizard Ch. 02'

a few holes (no oun intended) in your story, but all in all i loved it. keep um cummin'

Ok i loved it so much i love anthro women especially lizard anthro women so make 3 more chapters pleasei think the next should have them going to the big city doing things and the 4th should have them running fomr the Imperial gaurds but stop in a cave for sex and sleep also chapter 5 they have a child!

Kinda short, a few plot holes, but nevertheless looking forward to the rest.