All Comments on 'Dan and the Bottle Ch. 10'

I love how this story is progressing

love the story so far..

The next installment is already submitted, just awaiting approval.

Good stuff. Technically, you're doing good with the writing. Love the politics and have been getting quite a kick out of the anti-conservative/libertarian messages posted by the readers throughout the chapters. Odd how they can deny facts straight out of the historical record..... :D

It's certainly been an interesting read, and I'm glad for that as I didn't want to do any chores today anyhow! I'll be looking forward what comes next.