All Comments on 'Dan and the Bottle Ch. 10'

Good stuff. Technically, you're doing good with the writing. Love the politics and have been getting quite a kick out of the anti-conservative/libertarian messages posted by the readers throughout the chapters. Odd how they can deny facts straight out of the historical record..... :D

It's certainly been an interesting read, and I'm glad for that as I didn't want to do any chores today anyhow! I'll be looking forward what comes next.

The next installment is already submitted, just awaiting approval.

love the story so far..

I love how this story is progressing