All Comments on 'Dan'

@Sexecutioner

Spot on!

A fitting ending to the situation.

IMHO, reconciliation is rarely the answer unless the circumstance are truly unusual.

With the feminist agenda these days, many women have little respect for even a man their married to.

If you let her cheat, it says you won't even stand up for yourself, which says she can forget about you standing up for her when it really matters. It does have to do with male pride, ego or any other such BS.

She didn't want lover boy disrespecting him, the slut wanted that all to herself....

A JPB story with a solid finish. *5.

When I first started reading this story, I thought, ‘Bob’s lost it, he wants to see his wife with another man?’. But then that little twist at the end pretty much explained it all. Turned out to be a pretty good little short story with what I thought was a fitting ending. Thanks Bob, I really did enjoy it.

Five stars.

Stupid cheating slut got exactly what she deserved. On another front the story was told the way it should be… Therefore I liked it and rated it a 4.

Very thorough enactment of the consequences of infidelity.

Another fine story from JPB. Well done in every aspect: plot, pacing, characterization and well-crafted prose. ‘Nuff said!

Wow, a JPB story with a beginning, a middle and an end. Who woulda’ thunk it?

Five stars for that alone but, a good story in its own right.

OK

A fitting end.

She deserved her fate, the selfish entitled slut

Scores 5/5

Well played by Dan. Great Bob story with a finish.

Dumb

Yet another fantasy about big dick. In LW they are always above average like in Lake Wobegon.

I have to say this was interesting from the anon below "I've said it before ; what the hell is wrong with these people ?" Well whats wrong with them is that they are created and written this way, they arent real, there is nothing

"wrong" with them. The author made them exactly how he wanted them to be.

Something tells me she didn't tell Dan that she dropped Mark for him. Not to worry: she can always find another brown-eyed man to make her go gaga, and this time she's even single!

I've said it before ; what the hell is wrong with these people ? This women had a man she " loved " and then when her ex-lover shows up she is drawn to him . Why ? because his dick was bigger than her husbands and was able to touch the bottom of her coochy . Then she wails when she finds out the husband is on to her . She will show up in a new story somewhere in the future - different face, different body but with same old "it was a mistake," " I don't know how it happened " etc. ad nauseam !

Woooooooooops! She got caught by..... herself!

People go back and read the last paragraph it clearly tells you what’s in the second envelope - divorce papers ! She pulled them from the envelope and already in despair, she loosened her grip and they fell to the floor ! Just Plain Bob has written another masterpiece with this one ! The old adage ‘ you can’t have your cake and eat it too ‘ , rings true again ! Great story , great pace , great characters , great plot and absolutely the best summation I’ve read in quite awhile !!!

She drops Mark to be with Dan, marries the man of her dreams, Dan, but cheats on him with her first lover Mark. A cheater will always cheat. She is a selfish slut and thinks she can have her cake and eat it too. She got what she deserved.... I liked this tale of infidelity, the characters were standard - cuck, slut, and lover. The story had the right amount of background, just enough sex play. Really nothing new here but I did like it because of the way the author didn't have Dan be a wimp like most writers. 5/5 stars

just another whore .hee haw

Kathy was engaged when she started seeing Dan. Loyalty and fidelity are not in her nature. It took a few years but Mark finally got some revenge on them.

Maybe my favorite story from JPB. Great, final finish.

Finally a story about what happens to a slut when she forgets she is married to a real man, not the sissy cucks in so many lame stories. He loves her and went the extra mile. She was just too selfish to see that she had all she deserved and to reach for more would lead to her downfall. Always nice to see a whore pay the consequences for breaking her vows and cheating on a good man.

He did everything right and moved on without her. Why did she marry Dan in the first place? Kathey lacked the required commitment to create a positive home environment for raising children. JPB classic.

You got just what you wanted.

and rated it a 5. He got revenge against his wife BUT Mark suffered nothing. So here is what I believe should happen to Mark.

Mark was at his favorite bar trolling for a new piece of ass since Kathy told him to piss off he had been on the prowl ever since.

Mark thought his luck was changing a very attractive woman was making eyes at him and so he went over to her and started to chat her up.

After about an hour or so he suggested they head back to his place. She readily agreed. On the way to his car Mark was hit on the back of his head by someone. Then proceeded the beating of a lifetime. By the time the beating stopped he had several broken ribs and his genitals felt like mush.

The woman bent over to Mark and said, "Compliments of Dan. Never fuck married women as the husbands get upset." She then kicked Mark in the balls again and walked off arm in arm with his attacker.

They did, however ring 911 to report a mugging.

He spent several weeks in hospital. The doctors had managed to save one of his testicles but his penis was severely damaged and would not function properly again.

Several weeks after being released from hospital Mark was again mugged and this time the work over of his genitalia was complete. His penis was surgically removed and his remaining testicle was lost as it was too badly damaged.

He left town after that.

I cannot feel an ounce of pity for her. You wrote a story about a wife not worthy of the love she lost. The way she and her lover talked to each other made it abundantly obvious they were already involved. Buy him a beer and congratulate him.

For as much as JPB talks about cock size, we can guess what size he prefers on himself. As for the size matters argument? It's a myth perpetuated my ignorant people like JPB. Ask 100 women, 90% of them will tell you that normal/average is perfect, because large HURTS.

I have to assume that JPB uses this tired plot device because he lacks imagination. Let's face it, the majority of his stories are the EXACT, SAME thing. Same old cliche storylines and repeat characters. When he says, "more of my usual", he means more of the sophomoric drivel that he's been vomiting since day one.

and many older authors here seem to have a sophomoric "big cock" fetish. Perhaps some broad who is one in a 100 or a 1,000 told them about feeling "full". At least 80% of men are about the same size, varying from the mathematical mean (which is very close to 5") by no more than 4/5 inch. The 9 incher hardly exists statistically, but for the geezers, here's what happens when you are significantly larger than average (you don't need to be close to 9", btw): 1. Pussies tear and bleed, 2. If you go all the way in, no matter how careful you are the woman feels like she is being gut punched, and 3. she is almost certainly unlikely to consider anal...EVER. Sound like a big advantage? It isn't, and I think most of the authors who write ignorantly about "big cocks" are latent gays...or at least cuck wannabes. As for "fullness", I've lost girlfriends because, as one put it, "it feels like being fucked by a tree trunk". Again, sound wonderful? The whole

big cock" thing is idiotic. I'm glad I'm not 9", and I'd be better off a little smaller.

One of.my.favorite JPB.stories. Simple, and complete.

I like this one. Good job.

...no vengeance no repercussions, no...pain. otherwise, pretty good story. 4 stars. Thanx!

Loklie

As usual. I do like your writing JPB and, tho you are pretty predictable, it suits me just fine when I read one of your stories occasionally. Thanks for the read bud...4*

"Dan" had suspicions that his wife cheated on him whenever he left town on business trips. His trips never lasted more than two days and one overnight. "Dan" ran into "Mark", an old friend, while preparing for one of his trips. "Dan" asked "Mark" to go to the bar that "Dan's" wife was reported to be frequenting. "Mark" was to try to seduce "Dan's" wife. He asked how far he was allowed to go. "Dan" said, "As far as she will let you." "Mark" gave written testimony at "Dan's" divorce.

Well deserved justice served without bodily harm.

Yes there are. I was married to one of them. She proved to be a clueless cunt because, even after she knew that I knew, she arrogantly continued to get dressed and leave the house to fuck him.

After her 'accident', she chased me for five years, trying to get me to take her back... before finally accepting that I was DONE the day I walked out the door.... which was right after she discovered that I'd cancelled every credit card and had stopped paying all the bills four months earlier. (not once having slept with or fucked her.. or let her touch or suck on my eight + inch cock) While she was trying to convince me to take her back, she stated that I was one hell of a piece of ass and nobody fucked her the way I did or for as long. I just looked at her and said, "What you just said proves what a stupid cunt you are." ... adding "And I'll bet you miss the money and credit card accounts, too." That one hit her right between the eyes.

She'll never know how close she came to being locked in a plastic barrel surrounded by quick setting waterproof cement and then dumped overboard, somewhere in the middle of a large 650 ft. deep lake. She still doesn't know whatever became of the 'tough' punk she was fucking. Sending her his cock as a souvenir would have been too 'tell tale'.

gave it 5 *s

That can claim to love there spouse yet do the absolute worst thing they can do to them and their marriage? I'm not built that way.

And there is no reason that any spouse has to he preemptive and warn the other what would happen if there is cheating of any sort. It is a given; you break the vows and you are out the door. It it understood. Marriage is a commitment that if it is broken, then it is never going to be the same. No trust, no respect.

Kathy even hinted that she was done with Mark because of his disrespect of Dan but she may find someone else. Why didn't she put an end to it at that point? The answer is she is a selfish manipulative cheating slut who doesn't love her husband.

One of the 50 ways to leave your lover. I find this a very interesting LW story. Self inflected wound to kill the relationship.

I loved it!

What I love about this story and Bob's writing in general is that his use of the first-person narrator allows for the comedy of sentences like this: "I did like the full feeling I got from his big cock, but not enough to let him disrespect the man I loved."

Bob is a master at letting a character hang themselves with their own words and his use of that device adds more flavor and dimension to his narratives.

A simple but good story and well written other than a few typos. Big Cock stories are entertaining but are largely a myth. How common are ten-inch cocks? They are pretty rare, that's why you see the same guys doing porn were huge cocks are the theme. I'm of the mind that Mother Nature gave the average man the average dick and it can satisfy the average woman. I was told by a lover that foreplay and who she was fucking was more stimulating that what size cock she was fucking. I'm sure there are "big cock queens" that actually need a bigger cock than average, everything has its exception.

They can be so dumb.

Yep.....

Nuff said.

Shhh the average penis size on literotica is 8 inches. Any husband with a penis smaller than that gets cucked by someone with a bigger penis. It is a well known rule.

ONLY 6 inches?The average erect penis is just over 5 inches, Dan is on the large side of average!

But others had it right. She just wasn't a good person and her actions showed that. That was all the reason Dan needed to get a divorce. Although if she had gotten pissy and hired an attorney he would have gotten just a 50/50 split of their assets and no extra, regardless of what he thought.

park and riding all the rides. It's fun and it's scary and you get taken places you didn't see coming. I can't believe what a good writer you are. You are not wasted on here or any place else. Sometimes I don't like where you take me on the ride, but I am always entertained on the way. The thing about your writing JPB is that you are multidimensional and can do a BTB or a wimp story with the same alacrity. Hooty-hoo.

and now the REMORSE begins. TK U MLJ LV NV

but it was "sorry again" no mas. TK U MLJ LV NV

Nobody cheats and truly loves the person they are cheating on. The act of cheating on a spouse is the opposite of loving, respecting, and honoring the spouse, the marriage and even themselves. In short, a cheater is a mess in every way.

I understand the story, but would have preferred they at least had a chance to talk to each other face to face, if just to clear up some of the loose ends.

It is about honor, self respect, and the stability of the marriage. Cheaters are inherently bad spouses and terrible parents. Why chose one of them for a life partner, or keep one once you found out what they are?

No wimps here, no desires to allow cheating... loved it... Cheating spouse gets what she deserves. hope there is a chapter 2. Sounds like she will fight to keep him. At least never give up anyways. To right a wrong I would say

Although the ending was a bad one. I saw the central core of this story as the wife working behind her husband's back in total deceit. She never discussed with Dan her intent to live out her fantasy til she had already been doing that. She might have had half a chance if she discussed this fantasy first to achieve mutual assent. It didn't seem likely anyway. The morale of this story is don't cheat if you do there may be consequences far beyond your worst fear. Also, communication is extremely essential to ensure that each spouse is remaining relevant to one another's lives. The story was short and full of tongue in cheek. Interesting but no cigar.

Thanks for sharing.

very predictable - but okay.

She got what she deserved

When you cheat on your husband, be prepared to get kicked to the curb. That's the way it's supposed to be.

hoping they can never be found out, TK U MLJ LV NV

I can understand the set up but not waiting the 2 months

Another good one Bob. And DWarnut please park it. You are sure making an ass out of yourself. Thanks for the write Bob. Wish I could return the favour. TTFN Jim

I would have given it a 5***** rating except for the 9" cock that no normal human has. Possibly some 1 in a billion freak of nature may have a 9" cock. Even John Homes [1 in millions] was only 8.75".

The fact is, only men and perhaphs only homosexual men are interested in big cocks. If women preferred big cocks, big cocks would quickly [in evolutional terms] become the average. That is because, in that event, men with big cocks would produce more children on average than men with average size cocks.

Although a vagina will stretch up to 200%, an excited vagina is only 4 inches. Therefore, any cock much over 4" is going to completely fill a vagina and stretching it doesn't increase the number of nerve endings and most of nerve endings are at or within a couple of inches of the entrance of the vagina.

For a guy who churns out copy at supersonic speed, JPB can surprise and amaze you. I'm constantly surprised at the number of people that think he's just a cuckolding fetishist who turns out cookie cutter fiction. He's done a lot of really good stories, stories that are far more than stroke fiction.

And then, sometimes, as in "Dan" he can tear at your heartstrings. Read the opening to this story and if you don't have a fucking stone for a heart, try not to be unmoved. Yeah, the wife screwed up. Yeah, she betrayed her husband. She didn't, despite comments, betray Mike her first boyfriend. She simply dumped him. Happens all the time. But she did betray Dan and she broke a good man's heart.

And in a few paragraphs JPB does more to make the punishment and hurt she has to live with real than most writers could do in pages and pages. It's simply great writing.

Just re-read this story and even after ½ a decade DAN still stands out as JPB best work and one of the best short stories on Lit LW section. In a few paragraphs JPB is able to flesh out three characters and include sex, deceit, lying, double-crossing, and revenge-all the needed ingredients of a good tale.

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JPB is able to create three characters we all know or knew at some point in our life. Kathy –an attractive lady who has gone thru life experiencing the ability to eat her cake and have it too. Kathy has the classic “it all about me” complex. When Kathy is searching for Dan after the romp in Marks bedroom and Mark object to Kathy leaving-Kathy’s “punishment/threat” to Mark is to no longer have sex with him. Mark has the last laugh by telling Kathy “...do not let the door hit your ass on the way out”. You must love that Kathy calls Mark a “miserable bastard” after that. This from a lady that screws over two guys cheats on her husband, and lies to both Mark and Dan when they cared about her.

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Others have commented on Kathy’s lack of moral character in breaking off her engagement with Mark –not by telling the truth, but by setting Mark up and making Mark believe the break-up was his fault. I believe that even if Kathy had told Mark the truth Mark still would have been shattered. To be told his 3 year girlfriend/wife to be was leaving him for a man (Dan) she just met is bad no matter how it is done. Either way Kathy would still have gotten back together with Mark that first time 6 years later for several reasons-#1-As always “Its All About ME”-and what makes Kathy feel good” . #2 Of course Marks 9” dong. After six years of marriage Kathy would have been looking back on “the good old days” with wanting. #3 Familiarities. Kathy and Mark had a three year history and had banged hundreds of times. The comfort level and “what’s one more time” made the transition from Bar to bedroom easier. JPB had Kathy claim she never danced with anyone as she was a married lady-but with Mark –it was a short trip from dance floor to bedroom. #4-Guilt. Even the coldest hearted bitch would feel some remorse on the way Kathy ended her and Mark’s relationship. As it is “Always about Her” In Kathy’s mind letting Mark screw her- was a great gift to Mark. All these factors would allow Kathy to rationale her affair with Mark. Kathy all her life had everything because “It was “All about KATHY and her needs/wants-first, last and always”

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In hindsight Mark should have bought Dan a big bottle of Johnny Walker Black for getting Kathy away from him before Mark married Kathy. If Kathy would dump Mark while they were making final wedding plans and shopping for furniture-how long after their marriage before Kathy would have cheated on Mark? Although JPB had Mark claim he was screwing Kathy to as get back at Dan for stealing Kathy-In truth Mark was getting revenge on Kathy for what Kathy did to him. Dan was just a proxy. It is said that the opposite of Love is not hate –but indifference. Mark’s comments and lack of concern when Kathy left his apartment showed a man who no longer had any emotional attachments to Kathy – a lady Mark once loved -now Kathy was just a simple fuck. JPB had Mark –by the short introduction a” nice guy” and in the story been badly burned. Mark had gotten over it, gotten payback and was now able to sleep at night his ego and guy pride having been restored (Unfortuneately at Dan’s expense).

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JPB had Dan be the MAN! The Dan character faced up to his fears and greatest weakness-ie: his love for Kathy. JPB had Dan make the hard choice that Kathy and his love for her was a tumor on his soul and had to be removed and removed completely so what Kathy did would not grow and fester. Like ripping off a bandaide or amputating a diseased body part it was done without any half measures. The way JPB had Dan set up Kathy to make the final cut was a masterful stroke.

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A sequel would be tough to compete with the original DAN. Both Dan and Mark were written to be the type of “Nice Guy” every lady over age 25 dreams about marrying and being father of their children. A possible follow up -perhaps a POV from Mark, or years later with Kathy reactions after having gone thru a string of boyfriends , then seeing first Dan and later Mark with a loving wife and kids at the park –this would add closure.

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Classic JPB-still a good read years later.

This is an excellent story. The narrative is tight. The characters are well developed. The ending leaves much to be desired, a situation that I am sure pleases you. A follow-on story would be greatly appreciated.

Why is it that some woman have a good husband and want some strange cock. When they get caught you get I am so sorry. Bull Shit. I caught my first wife fucking around on me and I destroyed her life, after her romp with stud. I so enjoyed kicking him in the balls and watching his pain and pissing all over his bed. My exwife was crying doing the sorry speech. Well as you see I have no pity on cheats men and women--may they rot in a very hot place with the horned one.

I liked this story. It made me feel good.

Please write a second chapter of this story.

Definitely one of your best and arguably one of better stories to be found here.

and he did what he needed to do. no hitting the mark for her. the set up and execution worked

She said that Dan "meant more to her than life itself." So then she choose on multiple occasions to break her vows to him and thus destroy her marriage. This hardly sounds like Dan meant more to her than life itself, what it does sound like is her lust and selfishness meant more to her than life itself especially life with Dan. A life she no longer will ever have.

I realize that losing someone you love is never "Perfection Itself". But! How Hubby handled it all WAS perfection. And the bitch of it was that there wasn't any other way to kill the marriage that would do quite as well to ram home the basic hard line: The Bitch Couldn't Be Trusted. Ever.

So, at least hubby got away clean, and the bitch was left singin' the blues.

Gee if you wrote more story's like this with real men in them you could turn the comments back on bobie.<P>

It never was the lack of talent but the pathetic watching wimp men who turned almost everyone off to you writer. Kind of a shame that you won't see that.<P>

You could be one of the most anticipated Authors here and elsewhere, but instead you choose to write about pathetic pitiful self cuckolding wimps into watching his wife whore from the closet for the sick excitement of male humiliation.

How sad is that.

Gosh, a JPB male main character who actually has a brain and isn't afraid to use it. Will wonders never cease?! Good prose, believable dialog, realistic characters and a tight storyline. Thank you, Bob, for a story well-told.

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As to the need for a sequel, whatever for? She done it, he saw her do it, he divorced her and moved on, finis.

To be fair is a state of mind. Grit your teeth and do the right thing. In this story, the lead male character behaved like a man.

She had it coming but lets see what happends to her in chapter 2

Pat .

Atlanta,Ga

I liked it but needs chapter 2. I really think this "Bigger is Better" bull needs to stop. I've had girls who dumped the "Bigger" for me, "just average." I do think cheaters don't suffer enough. And this bitch should loose everything.

You lost me the first time you got Dan and Mark mixed up, so I quit reading. A story's main character ought to remember which man is her husbank.

I really liked this story and how it ended. Mark and Dan are better off without the B-er witch. Cool!

This story is excellent as far as it goes but I hope you will consider adding a second chapter.

One of the best efforts that JPB has written. For a short story, the characters were well developed. The dialogue flowed easily and naturally. And, of course, at the end we were rewarded with a real twist on what was expected.

One commentator noted that her failing was that it was "all about her". I don't disagree with this but it seems to me that her greater failing was that she lacked moral courage.

She divested herself of Mark by coming up with a pretex to end their engagement. She did not have the courage to sit down with Mark and explain to him that she had found someone else who had captured her heart. This was her first failing.

Secondly, upon meeting Mark for the first time in 6 years, she ends up in bed with his 9 inch cock for the next two nights. She simply did not have the integrity to walk away from a situation that required morality and marital fidelity over the satisfaction of a filling copulation.

There are other examples to be gleaned from this short story. That there are so many ways she failed her marriage is a testament to how well the story was written.

Another good one thanks

Good story, good ending. She shit on two men during her life involved with them and she got what she deserved.

As I usually like to read comments before I comment myself I was saved from saying you need to finish this. I sure don't know what happened to the end of the story, but as some provided it in the comments section I have read it all.

There are those who would beg for reconciliation. There were some who said "as much as she loves him" but in the remaining years of my life I will never "NEVER" see how anyone can say this woman really loved him. If she did she never would have done this to him. She loved herself. It started when she mistreated Mark in the first place. It was all about her.

Dan was right to walk away. It is what I would have done.

He only knew about two months of the affair. What if he later found out about the whole year? Reconciliation or not he would have been destroyed all over again. So no reconciliation was the right move.

Thanks for your efforts Bob.

Charleybear

Bob - Mystery solved. The last 4 paragraphs were simply dropped by Lit. I really enjoyed the story, particularly the twist at the end. I do join those who would like to see another chapter - - where do they go from here (and, yes, I'd be interested to see if a reconcilliation could really happen). All in all, one of your best. Great story.

JPB

Please accept my humblest apologizes for what I saod earlier... since the last paragraph was missing I assumed there was going to be a part 2!!!

I can see there is NOT going to be... and after reading the mssing text I have to change my rating to the highest possible.

Clearly after reading your last few stories you are moving or trying to move towards a more reasonable outcome in some of your stories rather than mindless silly fantasy like reconciliation.

Please continue to do so....

Men and woman cheat with different mindsets... with men it is almost always about sex. With women it is Often but not always women have the mindset "well this is just for me"... or "I deserve this"... or as you and others have stated it is sometimes ..."I can have the best of both worlds"...

Maybe its me.... but I can never understand that. In what part of life can ANYONE ALWAYS HAVE THE BEST OF BOTH WORLDS or the BEST of everything... and NEVER pay price??

If you work 80 hrs a week you have no marriage...

if you make $1,000,000/ yr and dont report it you will get caught ...

if you go for the hit and run with two outs and your number 4 hitter at the plate and the batter misses the ball the BIG inning is over...

if you cheat it will come out... and the devestation will be Kartina like and awful.

Thanks for a good read.

Bob

not only can't I see the rest of the story, but I cannot link to the rest of the comments. Oh well...

This is the missing text (from another site)!

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Confrontation would only put me in denial, I would accept what you did, forgive you and then go on to lead a shitty life. I needed something that would burn so deep into my soul that I could never bring myself to look at you or speak to you again.

"The entire wife watching fantasy was bogus. I knew that seeing you with Mark would do what I needed it to do. The idea was simplicity itself. Tell you the fantasy and let you do the rest. "My God, it's perfect" you would think, "I can do it with Mark in front of him and have the best of both worlds - my lover and a stable home life." I knew you would do it when you said, "What if it turns out I like it and want to do it again." You were already setting me up so your affair could continue only in front of me instead of behind my back.

"Since you are reading this that means that the deed has been done. The fact that I didn't rush back to your car and grab the envelopes says that I found your coupling with your lover to be just as disgusting as I expected it to be. I took a day off work today and several friends helped me move out of the house. I have cancelled all of our joint credit cards. I've cleaned out and closed our savings account, but I left you what is in the checking account and two of the certificates of deposit. The other five and what would have been your half of the savings will help set me up in an apartment or condo. I think it is only fair that since you drove me away you should pick up part of the tab for my having to relocate.

"I do not want to talk to you or see you again. Don't call, don't write, don't try and catch me at work. I want nothing to do with you ever again."

I dropped the pages from my fingers and I wept. I sobbed and tears ran down my face as what I had done hit me. Dear God, how could I have been so stupid. I let a dalliance with someone I didn't even care about destroy what I had with the man I adored, the man who meant more to me than my own life.

With trembling fingers I picked up the second envelope and opened it. I let out a loud wail and sagged down on the seat and my fingers let the divorce papers fall to the floor.

I got a call a from some hospital a few later. apparently Dan got into an accident and was killed. ah, well, I thought,, served him right for running our on a person as loving as me,,, but life goes on, I sayz to myself,,, within hours, I was being held lovingly again, in the arms of my more dependable sexual partner,,, life turns out to be beautiful. The End.

For many of us, this was the last sentence we got:

"I needed to put you behind me and it needed to be done in a way that there would be no coming back from it.

So some of us, I don't know if it was because of browser trouble of what, did not get your last paragraphs. Were I you, I would rag on LE. You wrote a dam fine story and many of us missed tha last of it. And that was a pity!

Regards,

C

Sorry people, but the story is complete. Dan said it as plain as day - he never wants to see her or talk to her ever again. As far as the questions about the second envelope, please re-read the ending - "With trembling fingers" she opened the second envelope and collapsed and let THE DIVORCE PAPERS FALL TO THE FLOOR.

Thanks for all the good comments

JPB

that this story was short and sweet. I assume that Dan needed to see her with another man (her lover) so he would never feel that she could be his again. I assume that the second package was divorce papers. Thanks for a great story!

SleeplessinMD

good so far but this is only a part of the story!

PLease submit the rest and while you are at it fix the comments!

dumped the whore. But what about the second envelope? Is there a part 2?

This happened on another site. The last paragraphs -- the end of this letter and what's in the 2nd envelope -- are missing.

Lousy ending. I was ready to give you a really high score and then I read the last paragraph. That was a piss-poor way to end the story. I know all about 'it's your story to do with as you please'. The end of this pretty good story was bullshit.