All Comments on 'Dance in the Rain'

by RedMonkeyButt

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estragonestragonabout 12 years ago
Liked the Local Color

A rainy night in Santone outside Loop 1604. Good story.

EtaskiEtaskiabout 12 years ago
Still love that tail

Enthusiastic, detailed, great setting detail, you make it so easy to imagine a thunderstorm in Texas. ....and I still love that creative use for the tail. ^.^

DerroreaperDerroreaperabout 12 years ago
Great Story!

Very easy to visualize based on great descriptive writing, thanks!"

sweet_lusciousdesiresweet_lusciousdesireabout 12 years ago
outstanding

Very well written! I love your descriptions and your creative use of language. You obviously have an extensive vocabulary, that makes your writing even more intriguing... not to mention your story is hot! Hot! HOT!

LynLeoLynLeoalmost 12 years ago
What Fun!

Loved the background. The Demon Summoning class at the local community college, LOL. Very likable characters. Great read! Thanks.

shortydeeshortydeeover 11 years ago
Add More!!!!!

I hope that you will be adding more to this story!!

Squirt65Squirt65over 11 years ago
WOW!!!!!

I just came home ( to Buffalo) from visiting Texas for a few day's (I Love Texas) but I sure wish I could find that kind of ride in Texas!!!! Great Read!!!

LovelyLvsLovelyLvsabout 11 years ago
Loved it!

Great read, exactly what I was looking for! Azazel is hot!

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The Inhuman Universe is still buzzing through my head right now, but unfortunately Anathema hasn’t really budged. I’m just not sure where I want that one to go or how it’s tying into the world as a whole. I can post it and see what reactions it gets, but it’s not finished. Wha...