All Comments on 'Dancin' With the Devil'

You need to start using periods where necessary. You had capital letters where new sentences were, but a lot of the time you didn't bother punctuating the end of a good sentence. Other than that, great writing!

I hope it was a true story!

Great story.

Very hot & horny!!

Well told wonderful Hot fantasy! Super erotic, The vivid descriptions are wonderfully arousing!