All Comments on 'Dandelion Wishes'

I'm glad you submitted it. Hopefully everyone else loves it as well. KUDOS!!!

Plz. Next chapter.plz! I loved it. Great beggining!!

this is a really good first chapter, i can't wait for the next installment

A few errors, but still a good start.

You captured Avery's heartbreak beautifully......it was hauting. I look forward to reading about these two. Great start!!!

He so better grovel, that bastard. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I really liked this story hope there is more to it!!

As strong as the Feelings they had for each other .. He would'nt let it go W/O giving it hissssAll in trying to Keep her.. Avery might be hurt andDistrustful.. with good reason but the Feelings she had for him are still inside it will take Alot of effort on his part .. To win her back.

She made the right decision to move on. Thanks for a great read.

The twat.i'll kill him.lol.really loved it.more please.:-)

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Love love love the ending. Had me laughing my ass off! Personally I would've shoved those dandies up his ass THEN told him to make a wish.

Great story but I'm torn. On the one hand, good for Avery and maybe Trey will think twice about dishonestly the next go round. The other side, forgiveness and a second chance. I'm with you either way but thanks for the story.

This cannot be the end... I'm totally on edge here. I am wishing really hard that this is a long story.

Definitely was NOT the ending I expected, but oh so very awesome! Good for Avery!

Amazing

I enjoyed the read. In your face Trey!! Can't wait for more.

that was so quick and fast, no muck around build up to blossoming love lol, u have a keen reader here, btw, i read ur bio, and didn't u say u had posted ur other story but nothing yet, and looking forward to battered, i like that you spoke 10 things about yourself, enjoyed the read.

ím not sure how I missed this story,but it was great. I hope you'll continue.

i love the ending!!! I have read this story like three times and I never get tired of it. Trey is hot, skaters are hot! I love the beginning as well when he introduces himself.

You have to write more for this story though! You just have to.

Girl...that was sooo good! That smile she gave him at the end, and closing the door in his face. There probably isn't a woman alive that doesn't wish she'd had an opportunity to do that very same thing! Cheaters suck and we forgive them way to fucking much!

This is the only word that came to my mind after reading your story. In the category of 'Romance', I think this is one of 3 best stories that I've read on LE. You know I always love your stories because you are different, your stories are different and the feelings after reading your stories are different. Keep writing and enlightening your readers' days and nights...

One of the best stories Ive read on here...are yew gonna write more..if not its cool too. I like the what she said afterwards that she didnt just start crying and take him back..thts wat he gets lol

wow. this was short and to the point and im happy to say i enjoyed it. Is this really it?? could there be more on this??

I know that I'm a bit late in commenting on this story, but I just recently started reading all your submissions and felt I needed to comment.

As I previously told you, I feel you write with a great deal of emotion and in this case that is well defined. The mature way Avery handled the situation with Trey shows that she far surpasses his adolescence, therefore I feel there is no room for a second chapter. Time for Avery to move on.

I disagree. I think you should follow up on this story. Its very well written almost poetic even... I would definitely like to find out where this goes and I'm quite sure a lot of others would too...

Okay omg I will get on my damn knee's if i have to you have to continue with this story!!!!

Please continue this story. It is so well written but it just ended without being final. I guess I just like happy endings or at least a story with a definate ending. This one just stops with a HUGE cliffhanger instead of an ending.

Please, please, please continue....

Trey was a jackrabbit and didn't deserve Avery. Her slitting her wrist wasn't cool she would need counseling and meet someone in the support group but NO MORE Trey.

i think you should write a follow up story about the both of them. this story was sooo beautiful. i cried.

This happens quite often in life, we just have to be strong and have supportive people in our circles with us. I love that she grew strong with the love and support of her best friend Tamara and Trey ended up getting what he dished out!

You get as good as you get in life. Trey messed up the minute he fucked her knowing what his situation was. Life is a bank. You put in good and you make gains...you put nothing in and you often get less than nothing back. Trey's account was heavily in the red!!!! Serves him right!!

Avery did the right thing. Trey was wrong and he broke her heart--she ended up getting hurt, but she had the strength to save herself in the end. Great story!!

Really nice story just goes to show not everything has a happy ending and the guy got what he deserved

Sucks for you dude but karma is no joke

Yesss!! Sucks for you buddy boy. Now he has no one - what a lying, cheating dog deserves.

This one completely broke my heart. Like, I have depression already, but reading this and Crazy In Love, I actually think I'm literally about to cry.