by Mandy57
I know I'm biased, but this was a wonderful story. Very well done, almost as if i was there witnessing it.
This is a beautiful little story, extremely well written. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Please keep writing.
What a talented writer. What a marvelous story. Just enough detail to let the reader's mind fill in the rest. Extremely moving.
I'm looking forward to the next story from Mandy57.
A sad and beautiful ghost story. It’s been years since you’ve written here; I hope that you’re still writing and publishing somewhere else.
There’s a wistfulness to the way this story is written, utterly captivating. Thank you.
I usually don't appreciate supernatural stories, but this had a gentle strength to it that had me captivated. I recognized where it was going quite early in page one, but I kept going and it worked out quite well. The story was what it was and there's no way to admire or complain about it just take for what it was. An experience. 4*