All Comments on 'Daniel's'

Please continue ASAP!

This may be the the most agrevating cliffhanger I have come across in a story on this site in a LONG while. JUST as the story was getting substantial- It just stops!! Nothing is really known yet, We don't know ANYTHING about the fiances point of view yet, please,please continue.

Agree with both comments. Need more! Seems like a good beginning but not enough information. Need the next chapter and hopefully a longer one.

*smiles*

Great beginning and teaser for a potentially delicious story. i greatly encourage you to continue writing and expound on this storyline. Don't leave us hanging so soon. *grins*

this story is very similar to bloodsong...

Oh seriously, we need more of this story. Like now, please.

I'm guessing the author is a fan of Lady Mira? Who can blame him or her but it would be good to see it branch off into a different direction.

Am curious to know what happens next

OK. Now what? Also, it needs some tight editing . . . .