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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great Start!!!

As a middle aged man, I loved your dream (much like one of mine). Dress her up, in black and strappy, and let her do the work. I look forward to another chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Grammar

Peak - Top of a hill or mountain

Peek - Quick look

Heal - Get better from an injury

Heel - Part of a shoe

Compliment - Say nice things about someone or something

Complement - Enhance in some way

Shutter - Protective grid covering an opening

Shudder - Exaggerated shiver; rapid muscle spasms

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