All Comments on 'Darcy, Come Home & Find a Bride'

Another of your great stories, and well tailored to be one of the most read.

Truly a remarkable writer, with the panache of a professional.

Please keep up the great writing.

one more time have this writer entertaint me , and left me

pusseled as to why i havent seen him or her puplished in the mainstream, i keep on getting this ide that the writer

has so much more to offer , that maby its the limits of this forum that hold him or her back !

There were some misspelled words and some garbled sentences. Also at one point Bonnie became, who was it, Connie I think. Some editing is needed but the story was great.

Why do some people always feel a need to fuss about spelling or typing errors. This is a fabulous story. Had a good laugh too. G.Belgium

I read this, I laughed, I cried;

I got to the end, and the comments, I died.

Seriously, this deserves both a continuation and a Gemini Story declaration.

Still got an undercurrent/frisson of someink else, Egmont.

Appalling grammar, punctuation and spelling, combined with unappealing characters and trite, unbelievable dialogue come together in an awful train-crash of a story.

Another great story. I continue to be impressed by your talent. I will continue to read your stories. Thanks for your time and imagination.