All Comments on 'Daring to Enjoy Life'

And more hot!

at its best. Great story! This is the way it is supposed to be. No jealousy all open and fun.

You know, I really like this story, but by the time I finished I almost couldn't bear to look at it one more time. It felt too good to change. But reading it here, a couple obvious issues that hopefully the reader can just blow past.

I still smell trouble as you continue this series. The longer it goes on, the more pathetic Dave will seem, and clearly Josh relishes the cuck role, so he can fuck around as much as Elaine might want to. Elaine is the problem to come, as the conflict over rights to access Nikki gets twisted beyond the bounds of simple matrimony. I guess this couple wants to stretch their personal limits. But will they stretch behaviors well beyond past what would be a normal(?), or at least more reasonable and naturally occurring breaking point? I think it helps that you wrote this visually, it must have been something you worked hard on. Were you able to sustain the energy and excitement in this tale, as hedonistic thrill seeking devalues the core relationship, and slowly but surely, destroys yet another marriage on the brink? Do you merely approach the cliff, or charge headlong off of it, at full steam ahead? Did you pack a parachute? And will the ending of this story be rushed out in exhaustion, or will it emerge as a carefully arrived at conclusion, that reminds the reader they got somewhere with this? In other words, how can this marriage survive Elaine's interference, and Josh's pussy destroying plunders into Nikki during this presupposed "playtime", fueled by here-to-fore " agreed upon" assumptions exchanged between "loving" and "consenting" adults? Yes, I asked, how can they possibly survive?

In my mind "first contact" is always the hottest story. I have no desire right now to figure out what comes next, because it would be repetitive. Not being completely inexperienced in the lifestyle, "disaster" is hardly the likely outcome of something like this. More like one couple takes a job in Texas. Everybody has a couple of kids. Facebook friends. Such is life.

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

I doubt seriously that this nasty shit is any kind of ultimate level of anything.