All Comments on 'Dark Angel Ch. 03'

by LevanaHyll

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SweetRapunzelSweetRapunzelabout 11 years ago
Well done babe!!

Enjoy it a lot.

transrmutransrmuabout 11 years ago
love it

cant wait for the next one

LevanaHyllLevanaHyllabout 11 years agoAuthor

Fallen Angel's re-edit just went live, 4/26/13. Called AOD for Angel Of Destruction. Please tell me which version is better.

KiwiKingKiwiKingabout 11 years ago
WOW.....

I go away for a week and come back to not 1 but 2!!!! stories.

Once again, this was a fantastic chapter. I'm off to check out the new AOD story.

Keep them coming Ms Fantastic.

Nicci

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
great

I love it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

A must read! When a story is written well enough to make you see it...wow! Love it!!!!

HimalayandewHimalayandewalmost 11 years ago
Loved this one !!!

Now that's what I call a man ,one who doesn't forgets his responsibilities and promises,the dangerous and sinfully handsome Ashriel ,but I too don't want Lucien to die so I hope things to get better and Lucien to return back to his friends and family safely .There are few things in this series that are making me a little uncomfortable though because I believe in exclusiveness of a relationship ,no having sex or intimate acts with person other than whom you consider your Love or partner but I have already said this before ,so it your story and your wish ,write as you think your plot works because that's just my opinion ,may be your other readers and fans would enjoy it . I liked this chapter very much, like all others of yours ,keep up with good work and remember you are awesome ,we all love you :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Superb!!!

Espectacular!!! Have to come back for more!!!!

LevanaHyllLevanaHyllalmost 11 years agoAuthor
Where is it?

I uploaded both AOD and Dark Angel chapter 5 last Saturday and its Friday and it still hasn't been posted. Not sure what's going on. If anyone is interested in continuing to read it, you're going to have to ask lit administration because its out of my hands. Otherwise I post no more. Bye-bye.

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