All Comments on 'Dark Assassin Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Thanks for the second chapter.I really enjoyed reading it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
An enjoyable Tale

this story is a joy to read as it is not just sex but an interesting tale as well. I am looking forward to the next chapter and more as you keep revealing the world that you have them inhabit. A good writer describes the surroundings and keeps the interest of the reader by fleshing out the story/tale to intrigue the readers interest and make them want more. Please bbe advised you are achieving it. Thanks, SurfurBob

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Dark Elf

Nice story, please google Dark elves and you can see what they look like, you describe him like a surface elf. Dark elves have black skin and white hair.

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