All Comments on 'Dark Dreams Ch. 12'

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MaHarrisMaHarrisabout 14 years ago
thank you

i loved your story will you come out with another that has to do with the dark dreams characters

mikothebabymikothebabyalmost 14 years ago
not satisfied

I am really not satisfied with the ending of this one - kind of left me flat - i hate being left hanging and this was a hang - many other ways to end it in my humble opinion

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
ENDING SUCKED

Not a very good ending,i think you could have added at least one more chapter,unless your ran out of ideas when you got this far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
bad ending

The story is really good, but you really left the ending hanging, you could have done more with the council, and how they become a new family, being there havnt been any new ones in ages... i think you could at least do another chapter or two for sure or maybe a sequal, afterall Circe is still out there and she also needs to be dealt wiht.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
WOW

this honestly could have become a movie...

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Lame that the favourites list is so damn short so i'm recording them here Navy SEAL's Graduation to Remember http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=324356&page=1 Poker Night with Angel and Alicia http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=28...

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