All Comments on 'Dark Magic Ch. 04'

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FormerReaderFormerReaderalmost 10 years ago
looks like I'm done

I am more of a romantic and I did not like the threesome. You have a good story line here but I think I will stop following it at this point. I liked the idea of Brian and Celeste together only.

Dry_opinionDry_opinionalmost 10 years ago
Well, it has the word "Dark" in the title ...

Liked it. Interesting, funny, raunchy and dark. Another fine chapter.

cittrancittranalmost 10 years ago
Well.

Now I know where the artifact's name came from.

As for me, personally, I'm more of a 'vanilla' pairing person myself, but I honestly don't care if the story is good enough -- and so far it is :D

GoesGruntGoesGruntalmost 9 years ago
Oh Well

Interesting setting and well written, but I was struggling with the negative emotion aspect. The threesome (MMF) finished the story off for me. Too bad really as I might have otherwise really enjoyed it.

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