by shameless_writer
I am more of a romantic and I did not like the threesome. You have a good story line here but I think I will stop following it at this point. I liked the idea of Brian and Celeste together only.
Liked it. Interesting, funny, raunchy and dark. Another fine chapter.
Now I know where the artifact's name came from.
As for me, personally, I'm more of a 'vanilla' pairing person myself, but I honestly don't care if the story is good enough -- and so far it is :D
Interesting setting and well written, but I was struggling with the negative emotion aspect. The threesome (MMF) finished the story off for me. Too bad really as I might have otherwise really enjoyed it.