All Comments on 'Dark Moon Ch. 01'

I enjoyed your story. I look forward to other chapters.

This is clearly going to be a rare gem of a story, one where I care about the plot and characters as well as the sex. In fact, if this has no sex in it at all I'd probably follow it anyway. I look forward to you submitting the rest of it.

I like it. there where a few grammar issues but not two bad. looking forward to more. thank you for sharing. Mechmanas

An interesting start

nice start. :) continue, continue.

I liked this one. It is, as stated above, an excellent start. I did have one minor quibble. In the story is the line, "the full moon was four weeks away." It happens I am an astronomer. Full moons happen every 28 days. That's four weeks, so if the next full moon is four weeks away, the current full moon is happening right now.

liking this just a few grammatical errors

I was initially distracted by the 4 weeks to a full moon as most people are taught it as 4 weeks between. Having looked it up it is never quite the same time period and is averaged out to 29.5 days; so this would fit the story. Hope bdsmbill is just a lay astronomer would hate him to calculate if an asteroid was going to hit the earth or not

I find it funny that Women are in charge, men are virginal and what a twist

loving it

How is it that females can be as promiscuous as they want yet males must not be at all? Who exactly are the females supposed to be fooling around with if the males aren't available? Other females?

Interesting twist on the werewolf genre - a femdom were-pack. Think I'll read the rest and find out if the idea has merit.

A lot of strange twisting of biological realities, and I don't mean the fantasy of having were's. I will jeep reading, but meh so far.