All Comments on 'Dark Stag Ch. 02'

Remember dilly bars at DQ?

Its criminal no one else has commented on either chapter yet!Its amazing how you form characters but keep them from turning too cliched while showing blow by blow how our protagonist handles raptors,showing how much passion and intellect and patience he bestows upon them,compared to handling palace intrigues and human pathos.

I eagerly look forward to reading more!

I'm starting to expect a long and plot-developing story here... your writingstyle is to my liking and you've put down the bases of some really different characters/cultures and several possibilities for complex relationships. I'll be watching!!

Am starting to love this. Nice writing.