All Comments on 'Dark Stag Ch. 03'

Loved it, and I'll be here when you post more! Keep writing please!

Curious to see how this all ends for those involved.

The story is purely captivating.

I mean it when I say the detail you put in this story is staggering and elevates it from being mere erotica and fantasy.In fact I can actually see this as an actual book series (or Trilogy)!

Keep up the excellent writing!

This is a good story and I am enjoying reading it. It is a little confusing at times though. I would suggest an editor to help with spelling and grammar.

Good job.

There are many things I like about this story but grammer is an issue and some awkward sentence structure. Also, girls giggle not guys.

Zebras aren't just horses with stripes - they're bad-tempered and not suitable for riding.