All Comments on 'Dark Sun Ch. 01'

I really don't what to say other than great chapter, and please don't leave us in suspense for to long I'm dying to know what happens does Leon get captured or does he get way or what.

You wanted feedback. This is shaping up to be a great story..if you finish it that is...LOL

I'm thinking Leon doesn't get captured just yet..kinda too early and besides, it is strange that Catherine doesn't even want to know what happened. Why he left her and all. She's obviously known his whereabouts all this time...

Personally I would demand an explanation especially if I loved the person..but then that's just me.

My question was answered in this piece (from the prologue about his wife)... now I am starting to get excited. This looks like a fantastic story in the making and I wish you the best of luck and inspiration :)

IT AGAIN, AND I DO HOPE YOU AN MIX IN CHARATERS FROM THE OTHER STORY( THOSE BEARS FOR ONE, THEY WHERE TO GOOD)

i'm loving the twists in this story. more? like it tomorrow? as in ASAP? ;-)

Intriguing past references, mixed with powerful possibilities.

More please, much more 😆👍👍👍