Dark Sun Ch. 01

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His body swayed dangerously but León had been shot many times, and from past experience he knew how to stop the dizzy feeling.

With staggering steps León pulled open the large doors wincing at the sudden brightness of the artificial lights. Quickly he slipped off his jacket throwing it into the bowl of a potted plant.

The blackness of his shirt would serve to camouflage the blood. Catching a whiff of lavender León's eyes zeroed on to the very man León had warned Catherine against.

Sean Dawson was one of the generals in charge of the Hunters, an organisation that strived to rid the world of all shifters. León was a lion shifter. A specie of one of three clans, Canidae, Panthera and Ursidae.

He was also Artashir, which meant that he was ruler of all lion shifters. His head on a mantle would be a great accomplishment for any hunter and the reward for his death was high. León's dark skin and white hair made it near impossible for him to hide his identity and the only thing that had been keeping him alive for the past ten years was that he was constantly changing his hair colour.

At the moment he had dyed it black, yet Catherine had been able to see through the disguise. Of course she was also his wife so it made sense that she would remember the colour of his eyes. Continuing through the crowd, León tried his best to keep away from the other patrons.

"Excuse me." He growled, wincing at his own tone but the woman had been close to bumping into him.

His skin was clammy with sweat and he knew that he was moving dangerously on his feet. Just as he reached the table where the rest of his employees were sitting the lights went out.

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Note to readers: So that was chapter one, please, please, please tell me what you think. Unlike Dark Moon this is a writing in progress so all input, feedback and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is welcomed and encouraged. :D

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Like your work

Intriguing past references, mixed with powerful possibilities.

More please, much more 😆👍👍👍

mokkelkemokkelkeover 13 years ago

i'm loving the twists in this story. more? like it tomorrow? as in ASAP? ;-)

catman71catman71over 13 years ago
HOORAY YOUR AT

IT AGAIN, AND I DO HOPE YOU AN MIX IN CHARATERS FROM THE OTHER STORY( THOSE BEARS FOR ONE, THEY WHERE TO GOOD)

lostchickenlostchickenover 13 years ago
Yay!!

My question was answered in this piece (from the prologue about his wife)... now I am starting to get excited. This looks like a fantastic story in the making and I wish you the best of luck and inspiration :)

HypechicHypechicover 13 years ago
Ok

You wanted feedback. This is shaping up to be a great story..if you finish it that is...LOL

I'm thinking Leon doesn't get captured just yet..kinda too early and besides, it is strange that Catherine doesn't even want to know what happened. Why he left her and all. She's obviously known his whereabouts all this time...

Personally I would demand an explanation especially if I loved the person..but then that's just me.

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