All Comments on 'Dark Sun'

too short!!!!

loved it, want more, please continue. you are making me question myself something rotten!!

was sad to see such a short beginning but cant wait for the next chapter!!!You have been missed!

i'm already anxiously waiting how this will continue. it's a short but sweet opener

I don't understand the whole 'last night together' thingy - did they just get married? I am so confused already and dying for answers. See now I want to know more! You can't do this to me! You can't start a series like that and then finish it so quickly ... sigh... I guess I will have to learn patience lol

You really must continue this!

who are these people(?) and why should we care?

However you assume previous knowledge of your dark series. I know what you are talking about, at least with Leon. I don't like when a previous series is re-hashed as the first chapter of the next series. But you should have put a disclaimer the read the previous series first......

Just for the record I find your writing to be excellent and entertaining. I don't have any trouble following along. However, you lied to us. You PROMISED a Trilogy and 3 short chapters doesn't even make a good start to a Sequel.

I know life happens but you did ........ PROMISE!