by msxxl
This is a really well thougth out story! It provides true justice to unfeeling thugs. As usual, msxxl's writing is very very good.
The strength of the story for me, was in Carlos having to experience the pain he had caused. To come face to face, in a way, with his sins and to suffer for them. The final sentences are also very powerful, in adding that note of regret, the what ifs of his life.