All Comments on 'Dark Woman's Revenge'

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madengineer3madengineer3almost 17 years ago
Excellent, and unique!

This is a really well thougth out story! It provides true justice to unfeeling thugs. As usual, msxxl's writing is very very good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I agree, unique and compelling

The strength of the story for me, was in Carlos having to experience the pain he had caused. To come face to face, in a way, with his sins and to suffer for them. The final sentences are also very powerful, in adding that note of regret, the what ifs of his life.

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