by ChazThain
Please take a minute to let me know what you think about this story ... characters, plot, believability, dialogue ... and the sex.
Excellent twist with the daughter becoming involved, like to see where it leads.
Great start, but a little long to get to the good part.
Daughter involvement interesting twist. Where does it go? Lots of good possibilities.
It would help massively if you put this in the right category of incest/taboo.
The story was going really well until you decided to include her step daughter aaaaannnnd then I just wanted to vomit, such a massive turn off. I can’t help it but vomit inducing concepts have always had a negative effect on me.