All Comments on 'Daughter of the Moon'

A little too fast paced but an interesting read for a first timer. A very intriguing world as well.

on your first story. Your story is good and I look forward to the next chapter. I only have one small complaint, could you slow the action down alittle bit. That part just feels rushed. But again the story itself is good. I will be watching for chapter 2

let me get this straight this girl cries like once because her parents died and isn't mad at all that those people killed her parents just a little upset every once in a while. And she wears that tiara that one of her parents murderers gave her without even a little fight? This is so frustrating. I hate my parents, but I would still want to kill or at least yell at their murderers instead of being completely nice and doing everything they say and excepting gifts from them. This is obsured.

I've just got back from a spell in hospital and came across your story.

It is good so far and cannot wait for the next chapter. WELL DONE