All Comments on 'Dave's Awakening Ch. 02'

I knew Paul was cocksucker from chapter 1 and that Dave was a virgin so good job describing his first time "up to bat". I could feel the intensity! You could use a little better editing though. Spend a few minutes proof reading and please use spellcheck.

And that's the point, right?

Nice story. Thanks

Too short, not enough character. Hot tho!