by Thorilla
have just discovered your page... loved your tale.. will read the other submissions over the next few days... there are a few syntax errors and i don't think that there's such a word as quitted (lol)... i use an editor from the volunteer editors facility on this site and together we've produced better stories... not a criticism, just trying to help... more, more, more
I stumbled onto your stories and just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed them. You have a talent for melding the scene and characters together in a most vivid and pleasant way. Thanks for your efforts and the stories.