All Comments on 'Dawn: A Tale of Submission Ch. 03'

More!:-)

I enjoyed the story. Looking forward to new chapers!

Well done!

A very enjoyable read. Well written and thought out story. Looking forward to next chapter.

great,more please.

This was one of the best stories I have read in a VERY long time, I have to work in the morning and i could not bring myself to stop reading! I would love to hear more of your writing, I think your very very talented!

Please keep up the great work! I love this series so far, it is very hot! I look forward to more chapters in it! I especially love reading about Dawn and Minda! All characters are wonderful though and I can't wait to read more!

Please let me gather my breath...I can assure you this is one hot steamy sex read. Oh if I could find a Master like him I would not share ..LOL I am greedy that way but this story was pure lust love and hell of a lot of good fucks. Love it....