All Comments on 'Day One'

the story had the elements of a good one but was left unfinished. a gun, for gods sake the thing called for retrobution not execution. better luck next time.

I liked it LOL I thought it was funny :)

While the writer is fairly skilled, there is nothing erotic in this story. Unless you like disturbing imagery of women as total victims. To me this genre is about the victim unable to NOT enjoy what is happening to them. Any time they can not it quickly becomes disturbing at best and downright wrong on too many levels (IMHO)